List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating words like 'Listing Listing' and complete your sentences properly. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, 'Yes, I make a list before shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything.'

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list before shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

Sugestão: Your answer has some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to speak clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to explain how the list helps you. For example, 'Yes, I use the notes app on my phone to make a list for my work. It helps me complete tasks on time and gives me a sense of accomplishment.'

Exemplo: Yes, I use the notes app on my phone to make a list for my work. It helps me complete tasks on time and gives me a sense of accomplishment.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas and use complete sentences. Explain clearly why some people avoid making lists. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember everything and enjoy the freedom of not being restricted by a list.'

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember everything and enjoy the freedom of not being restricted by a list.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but incomplete and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to finish your sentences and use linking words. For example, 'I prefer to make lists on my phone using the notes app because paper lists can be lost easily, especially when I am outside.'

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone using the notes app because paper lists can be lost easily, especially when I am outside.

× Yes, I make a list before going shopping because. Listing Listing before shopping makes the shopping more arranged and it helps me to forgot to buy something.

✓ Yes, I make a list before going shopping because listing before shopping makes the shopping more organized and it helps me not to forget to buy something.

The original sentence has a sentence fragment ('because.') and repetition ('Listing Listing'). Also, 'more arranged' is incorrect; 'more organized' is appropriate. 'Helps me to forgot' should be 'helps me not to forget' to express the intended meaning correctly.

× Yes, I make a list for my work in my in my notes app in my phone and it may It helps me to accomplish my work in timely and it feels it made me feel it made me feel accomplished sense.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work in my notes app on my phone and it helps me to accomplish my work in a timely manner and it makes me feel a sense of accomplishment.

The phrase 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' as apps are on devices. 'In timely' is incorrect; 'in a timely manner' is the correct expression. The sentence also has redundancy and awkward phrasing that needed correction for clarity.

× I think they can they, but they think that they can remember everything when they show they when they accomplish your work and when they go to shopping and and they enjoy the freedom that.

✓ I think they can, but they believe they can remember everything when they do their work and go shopping, and they enjoy that freedom.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words and unclear references ('show they', 'your work'). The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× I like to make a list on my notes app instead of paper because there is a chance of losing paper in the road or in some places and that's why I prefer make lists on phone instead of paper more than.

✓ I like to make a list on my notes app instead of on paper because there is a chance of losing paper on the road or in some places, and that's why I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper.

The preposition 'in the road' should be 'on the road'. Also, 'prefer make lists' should be 'prefer making lists' to use the gerund form after 'prefer'. The sentence ending 'more than' is incomplete and replaced with 'rather than on paper' for clarity.