List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议回答时先明确回答问题，然后用简洁的句子补充细节，避免重复和语法错误。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to avoid forgetting anything important. However, if I just go shopping casually with my family or friends, I might not make a list.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少具体细节和逻辑。建议先明确身份，再说明何时制作清单，并举具体例子，使用连贯的句子。

Exemplo: Although I am a student, I make lists when I have difficult tasks. For example, when I write articles about biology, I list the main points to organize my ideas clearly.

Sugestão: 回答含糊且重复，缺乏具体理由和逻辑。建议直接回答问题，给出具体原因，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous. Also, they might find lists restrictive and feel that planning limits their creativity.

Sugestão: 回答较好，但表达略显重复且结尾不完整。建议简洁表达偏好，说明原因，并避免重复。

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone using the calendar app because it is convenient and allows me to edit plans easily whenever necessary.

× Well, it depends on sometimes I won't buy a lot of things I will do at least in order to not forget anything.

✓ Well, it depends. Sometimes I don't buy a lot of things, but I will make a list at least in order not to forget anything.

句子中时态使用不当，'won't buy' 应改为一般现在时 'don't buy'，因为描述的是习惯性动作。建议将句子拆分为两个部分，使表达更清晰。

× But uh, most of time I just hanging out with my parents or my friends in the supermarket and.

✓ But, most of the time, I just hang out with my parents or my friends in the supermarket.

'most of time' 应为 'most of the time'，且 'hanging out' 应用一般现在时 'hang out'，因为描述习惯性动作。句子末尾的 'and' 是不完整的，应去掉。

× Well, actually I'm a student now, but uh, when I facing something difficult, I will definitely make a list from uh, for example, like my, uh, like, like my articles, I will prepare it from the biologicals and.

✓ Well, actually I'm a student now, but when I face something difficult, I will definitely make a list. For example, for my articles, I will prepare them from the biologicals.

'when I facing' 应改为 'when I face'，因为需要一般现在时。句子结构混乱，建议拆分并调整表达，使其更清晰。

× For example, like my, uh, like, like my articles, I will prepare it from the biologicals and.

✓ For example, for my articles, I will prepare them from the biologicals.

'articles' 是复数，指代代词应为 'them' 而非 'it'。

× Well, I think this question is interesting and maybe it's because once it's become, it's becomes from one's nature, you know, or someone like making plans and making these to make them make them feel, you know.

✓ Well, I think this question is interesting, and maybe it's because once it becomes part of one's nature, you know, or someone likes making plans and making these to make them feel, you know.

'it's become' 应为 'it becomes'，保持一般现在时。'someone like making' 应为 'someone likes making'，主谓一致。句子结构复杂，建议简化表达。

× or someone like making plans and making these to make them make them feel, you know.

✓ or someone likes making plans and making these to make them feel, you know.

主语 'someone' 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 -s，故 'like' 改为 'likes'。

× Well, I'd like to use my, especially the calendar note, you know, it's really, it's really useful, I think You can edit it whenever a situation changes or the plan has changed or the timetable changed.

✓ Well, I'd like to use my calendar note, you know, it's really useful, I think. You can edit it whenever a situation changes or the plan changes or the timetable changes.

'has changed' 和 'changed' 应统一为一般现在时 'changes'，因为描述的是习惯性或经常发生的动作。句子中断句不清，建议加标点。

× It's really convenient, but write on paper.

✓ It's really convenient, but I prefer writing on paper.

句子缺少主语和谓语，'write on paper' 结构不完整，应补充主语和谓语使句子完整。