List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but you can improve by avoiding redundancy and using more precise linking words to enhance coherence. For example, instead of repeating 'when I want to buy' and 'when I only need to buy', you can use linking phrases like 'in contrast' or 'on the other hand' to make your answer more natural and effective.

Exemplo: I sometimes make a list when I shop, depending on what I plan to buy. For instance, I prefer making a list when buying groceries at the supermarket. On the other hand, if I only need one or two simple items, like a book or a phone, I usually don't make a list. Overall, I find making a list quite useful.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases that affect clarity. To improve, focus on correct sentence structure, clearer vocabulary, and linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'you know' in formal speaking.

Exemplo: Yes, I do make lists for my work, and they help me manage multiple project deadlines effectively. By prioritising tasks, I can organise my time better. Moreover, it feels satisfying to tick off completed tasks. Therefore, I plan to continue using lists in the future.

Sugestão: Your answer provides relevant ideas but has some unclear expressions and minor errors. To improve, use clearer vocabulary and correct phrases, and organise your ideas with linking words for better coherence. Avoid confusing phrases like 'people's learning parents' and 'takes all sorts to make a word'.

Exemplo: People have different habits and preferences, so some don't like making lists. For example, some prefer writing notes on their hands, like my colleague does. Others might take photos or jot down reminders on their calendars. In short, everyone has their own way of remembering things.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and sentence structure, and by using clearer linking words. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'gives people a not professional impression' and use more natural expressions.

Exemplo: I use both paper and phone to make lists. For work, I prefer paper lists because I see them often and it helps me avoid using my phone too much, which might seem unprofessional. However, I use my phone to make lists for tasks I need to do at home, like paying bills or personal errands.

× I prefer making a list.

✓ I prefer to make a list.

The verb 'prefer' is commonly followed by the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the gerund 'making' in this context. Using 'to make' sounds more natural and grammatically correct in English (Hong Kong SAR China).

× such as like a book or a phone

✓ such as a book or a phone

The phrase 'such as' already means 'for example', so adding 'like' is redundant and incorrect. Use either 'such as' or 'like' but not both together in English (Hong Kong SAR China).

× but can list makes them easier for me to prioritise the work.

✓ but lists make it easier for me to prioritise the work.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and subject-verb agreement. 'Can list makes' is incorrect; it should be 'lists make' to agree with the plural subject and correct sentence structure in English (Hong Kong SAR China).

× Its easier to arrange my time when I know which one is in origins, which one is not you know.

✓ It's easier to arrange my time when I know which one is urgent and which one is not, you know.

'Its' should be 'It's' (it is). The phrase 'in origins' is incorrect; likely intended 'urgent'. Also, adding commas improves clarity. Correct pronoun contraction and word choice are important in English (Hong Kong SAR China).

× In the future I will continue using.

✓ In the future, I will continue using it.

The sentence is incomplete; 'using' needs an object. Adding 'it' clarifies what will be continued. Also, a comma after 'In the future' improves readability in English (Hong Kong SAR China).

× people's learning parents are different, as well as their shopping or working or memorizing habits.

✓ people's learning patterns are different, as well as their shopping, working, or memorizing habits.

'Learning parents' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'learning patterns'. Also, commas are needed to separate items in a list for clarity in English (Hong Kong SAR China).

× Maybe some of them prefer using our words to sort things out, like randomly writing down things on their hands.

✓ Maybe some of them prefer using their own words to sort things out, like randomly writing things down on their hands.

'Our words' should be 'their own words' to correctly refer to the people mentioned. Also, 'writing down things' is better as 'writing things down' for natural word order in English (Hong Kong SAR China).

× That's one way of my colleague used to do.

✓ That's one way my colleague used to do things.

The phrase 'one way of my colleague used to do' is ungrammatical. It should be 'one way my colleague used to do things' to be correct and clear in English (Hong Kong SAR China).

× In short, it takes all sorts to make a word.

✓ In short, it takes all sorts to make a world.

The phrase 'make a word' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'make a world'. This is a fixed expression in English (Hong Kong SAR China).

× which reminds me all the time whenever I see the note.

✓ which reminds me all the time whenever I see the note.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× it prevents me from using the phone all the time during at work, which gives people a not professional impression.

✓ it prevents me from using the phone all the time at work, which gives people an unprofessional impression.

The phrase 'during at work' is incorrect; 'at work' is sufficient. Also, 'a not professional impression' should be 'an unprofessional impression' for correct article and adjective use in English (Hong Kong SAR China).

× I make the list on my phone while I need to bring some work back home and remind myself some personal stuff like banking when to pay the fee.

✓ I make the list on my phone when I need to bring some work back home and remind myself of some personal stuff like banking, such as when to pay the fee.

'While' is better replaced by 'when' to indicate time. Also, 'remind myself some personal stuff' should be 'remind myself of some personal stuff'. Adding 'such as' clarifies the example. These corrections improve preposition and sentence clarity in English (Hong Kong SAR China).