List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and redundancy in your answer. Also, ensure your sentences are grammatically correct and clear. For example, instead of saying 'avoid myself to to buy unnecessary items', say 'avoid buying unnecessary items'. Keep your answer concise and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and focus on buying only what I need. This way, I avoid purchasing unnecessary items and save money, as I did last year.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but watch for small grammar mistakes like 'I'm making a list helps me' which should be 'making a list helps me'. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me focus on tasks I need to complete before deadlines. It also gives me a great sense of achievement when I finish everything on the list, so I stay organized and manage my time effectively.

Sugestão: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh'. Also, complete your sentences fully and use linking words to explain your points logically.

Exemplo: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by them. They prefer more flexibility to complete tasks whenever they want, without being bound to a fixed plan.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, say 'I always have my phone with me, so I can check and edit my tasks anytime. I use the Notes app, which helps me organize my tasks well.'

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I always have my phone with me, so I can check and edit my tasks anytime. I use the Notes app, which helps me organize my tasks effectively.

× I avoid myself to to buy unnecessary items and this saves money last like last year last.

✓ I avoid buying unnecessary items and this saved money, like last year.

The phrase 'avoid myself to to buy' is incorrect. 'Avoid' should be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing), not a reflexive pronoun or infinitive. Also, 'last like last year last' is redundant and unclear, so it was simplified to 'like last year'.

× I always make a list for my work because it helped me focus on the task that I need to complete before the deadline.

✓ I always make a list for my work because it helps me focus on the tasks that I need to complete before the deadline.

The sentence mixes present tense 'always make' with past tense 'helped'. To maintain consistency, 'helped' should be changed to present tense 'helps'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context.

× Additionally, I'm making a list helps me stay organized and manage my time.

✓ Additionally, making a list helps me stay organized and manage my time.

The phrase 'I'm making a list helps' is incorrect because 'I'm making' is a present continuous verb phrase that cannot be the subject of 'helps'. Instead, the gerund phrase 'making a list' should be used as the subject.

× In my perspective, that's because the sense of, uh, restrict or bond with this list and they need to feel, maybe they want to feel more flexibility with that tasks.

✓ From my perspective, that's because of the sense of restriction or being bound by this list, and they want to feel more flexibility with those tasks.

The phrase 'In my perspective' should be 'From my perspective'. 'Sense of restrict or bond' is incorrect; it should be 'sense of restriction or being bound'. Also, 'that tasks' should be 'those tasks' to match plural form.

× They want to finish anyone, anytime they want.

✓ They want to finish anything, anytime they want.

'Anyone' refers to people, but here the meaning is about tasks or things, so 'anything' is the correct pronoun.

× There is no doubt the phone because it's more convenient and I have my phone in everywhere every every time that I can check my task and I can complete my task editing on on the task that I have on the list, I use the Note app which is helps me a lot to arrange my task.

✓ There is no doubt about the phone because it's more convenient and I have my phone everywhere, all the time, so I can check my tasks and complete them. I use the Note app, which helps me a lot to arrange my tasks.

The phrase 'There is no doubt the phone' needs the preposition 'about'. 'I have my phone in everywhere every every time' is incorrect; it should be 'I have my phone everywhere, all the time'. 'Complete my task editing on on the task' is unclear and redundant, simplified to 'complete them'. Also, 'which is helps' should be 'which helps'.