Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I usually make a list when I shop. It reminds me of something I need to buy and if I don't make a list I always forget to buy some merchandise because of my poor memories.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, of course it's important for me to make a list when I work, especially before the final exam. It help me to manage the time better and remind me of something I need to review.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Well, I think some people don't like to make a list because they think they have a good memory, that they don't need a reminder. The other people may think the list will bring them more pressure so they avoid them.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient for me to add, change or delete some items from the list and I often lose the paper list. In this way I can keep my list safer and more.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点,但句子结构较为简单,且有些重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式,避免重复,并增加连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need. Otherwise, I tend to forget some things due to my poor memory.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误(help应为helps),且表达略显简单。建议注意主谓一致,使用更丰富的词汇,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I work, especially before final exams, because it helps me manage my time more effectively and reminds me of the topics I need to review.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法和表达不够自然的问题,且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构,使用更自然的表达,并注意代词使用。
Exemplo: Some people avoid making lists because they believe their memory is good enough, so they don't need reminders. Others might feel that lists add extra pressure, so they prefer not to use them.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答表达了观点,但最后一句不完整且表达不够清晰。建议完善句子,使用更准确的词汇,并保持句子完整。
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient to add, change, or delete items. Also, I often lose paper lists, so using my phone helps me keep my lists safer and more organized.
× It help me to manage the time better and remind me of something I need to review.
✓ It helps me to manage the time better and reminds me of something I need to review.
主语是第三人称单数(It),谓语动词应加-s,表示第三人称单数形式。
× The other people may think the list will bring them more pressure so they avoid them.
✓ The other people may think the list will bring them more pressure so they avoid it.
代词指代不明确,'the list'是单数,后面应使用单数代词'it',而不是复数'them'。