List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên, ví dụ như 'I'm usually make' nên là 'I usually make'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cách danh sách giúp bạn tiết kiệm tiền.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me prioritize the items I need and avoid buying unnecessary things. This way, I can save money and shop more efficiently.

Sugestão: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'it's helped me' nên là 'it helps me'. Câu trả lời hơi dài và thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc giữa các ý. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các câu và làm rõ hơn về hiệu quả của việc lập danh sách trong công việc của bạn.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize important tasks. This way, I can focus better and complete my work more effectively.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ 'not referred to follow the bliss' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên dùng từ vựng đơn giản, chính xác và câu văn rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về tính cách của những người không thích lập danh sách.

Exemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous. They feel more free when they don't have a fixed plan and can do things as they wish.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'I'm making list' nên là 'I make lists' hoặc 'I prefer making lists'. Câu trả lời hơi dài và lặp từ 'convenient'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về lợi ích của việc dùng điện thoại để lập danh sách.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient. I can carry my phone everywhere and quickly jot down important notes, which helps me remember things easily.

× Well, I'm usually make a list when I'm going to shop because it's helped me to prioritize the item that I need to buy and not be distracted by the other unnecessary thing.

✓ Well, I usually make a list when I'm going to shop because it helps me to prioritize the items that I need to buy and not be distracted by other unnecessary things.

The verb 'make' should be in the base form after 'I am usually' is incorrect; 'usually' indicates simple present tense, so 'I usually make' is correct. 'It's helped' should be 'it helps' to match the present tense context. 'Item' and 'thing' should be plural to agree with 'other unnecessary things'.

× Well, I'm usually make a list when I'm going to shop because it's helped me to prioritize the item that I need to buy and not be distracted by the other unnecessary thing.

✓ Well, I usually make a list when I'm going to shop because it helps me to prioritize the items that I need to buy and not be distracted by other unnecessary things.

The singular 'item' and 'thing' should be plural 'items' and 'things' because the context refers to multiple objects.

× The next thing is help me a lot to save my money.

✓ The next thing helps me a lot to save my money.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular present tense 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'The next thing'.

× Definitely yes, While my majors in communication would require a flexible task.

✓ Definitely yes. While my major in communication requires flexible tasks,

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'Majors' should be singular 'major'. 'Would require' should be 'requires' to indicate a general truth. 'Flexible task' should be plural 'flexible tasks'.

× However, I always make a list when I'm going to do something because it's helped me to prioritize what is the most important task and I could focus on it actually and I think it's grow well.

✓ However, I always make a list when I'm going to do something because it helps me to prioritize the most important task, and I can actually focus on it, and I think it helps me grow well.

'It's helped' should be 'it helps' to match present tense. 'I could' should be 'I can' for present ability. 'It's grow well' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me grow well' or 'it helps me improve'.

× I think it depends on their personality.

✓ I think it depends on their personality.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× For some people they are not referred to follow the bliss because they would go with the flow and this make them feel more freedom and not be restricted by any fixed plan.

✓ For some people, they do not prefer to follow a list because they would go with the flow, and this makes them feel more free and not restricted by any fixed plan.

'Are not referred to' is incorrect; should be 'do not prefer'. 'The bliss' is incorrect; should be 'a list'. 'This make' should be 'this makes' to agree with singular subject. 'Feel more freedom' should be 'feel more free'.

× At the resolve they may feel that they are more free to do what they like.

✓ As a result, they may feel that they are freer to do what they like.

'At the resolve' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'As a result'. 'More free' is better expressed as 'freer'.

× Oh, I'm making list on my phone more because it's very convenient and comfortable.

✓ Oh, I make lists on my phone more because it's very convenient and comfortable.

'I'm making list' is incorrect; should be simple present 'I make lists' to express habitual action. 'List' should be plural 'lists'.

× Oh, I'm making list on my phone more because it's very convenient and comfortable.

✓ Oh, I make lists on my phone more because it's very convenient and comfortable.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to indicate multiple instances.

× You know, phone can be bring to everywhere and I can always open the note up to jot down some important note and it's helped me to remind about something that I can't remember.

✓ You know, the phone can be brought everywhere, and I can always open the notes to jot down some important notes, and it helps me remember things that I can't recall.

'Phone' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Can be bring' is incorrect; correct passive form is 'can be brought'. 'To everywhere' should be 'everywhere'. 'Open the note up' should be 'open the notes'. 'It's helped me to remind about' should be 'it helps me remember'.

× So it's very convenient and I love it.

✓ So it's very convenient, and I love it.

Sentence is correct; only added a comma for clarity.