List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了意思，但时态使用不准确，应该用现在时态描述习惯行为。此外，句子结构可以更简洁自然，避免重复表达。建议使用简单直接的句子，并注意时态一致。

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping to ensure I buy everything I need. This helps me save time and avoid forgetting items.

Sugestão: 回答中表达了观点，但句子较长且结构不够清晰。建议分成两句，使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意词汇搭配，如“meeting list”应改为“to-do list”或“task list”。

Exemplo: Yes, I use a to-do list to organize my assignments. It helps me know what I need to do each day, which makes me more efficient.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，避免重复和错误的词汇使用。

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory too much and are too lazy to write things down. However, relying on memory is not always reliable.

Sugestão: 回答较自然，但有口语填充词“uh”，建议在正式考试中避免使用。句子可以更简洁，连接词使用更自然。

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient to check them anywhere, and I don't need to carry paper notes.

× Yes, every time before I went to a shopping mall, I always make a list to make sure that I can find the things I want to purchase.

✓ Yes, every time before I go to a shopping mall, I always make a list to make sure that I can find the things I want to purchase.

The sentence mixes past tense 'went' with present tense 'make' and 'want'. To maintain consistency and express habitual action, use present tense 'go'.

× It makes me to save some time.

✓ It helps me save some time.

The phrase 'makes me to save' is incorrect. The verb 'make' is followed by the base form without 'to'. However, 'helps me save' is more natural here to express assistance in saving time.

× Yes, a meeting list helps me to make my assignments well organized and I can know what I need to do in a whole day that makes me more efficient.

✓ Yes, a meeting list helps me keep my assignments well organized and I can know what I need to do in a whole day, which makes me more efficient.

The phrase 'make my assignments well organized' is awkward; 'keep my assignments well organized' is better. Also, 'that makes me more efficient' should be connected properly with a comma and 'which' to clarify the cause.

× They are they too. They are too trusted to their memorization and they are lazy to take notes to let them assignments well organized.

✓ They are like that too. They trust their memorization too much and are lazy to take notes to keep their assignments well organized.

'They are they too' is unclear and incorrect. 'They trust their memorization' is the correct expression. Also, 'let them assignments' is incorrect; it should be 'keep their assignments'.

× But it's not a habit because the memorization is not so reliable as you think.

✓ But it's not a good habit because memorization is not as reliable as you think.

The phrase 'not so reliable as you think' should be 'not as reliable as you think' for correct comparison. Also, 'a habit' is vague; 'a good habit' clarifies meaning.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient for me to check it everywhere and I don't need to, uh, bring a specific paper note.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient for me to check it everywhere and I don't need to, uh, bring a specific paper note with me.

The phrase 'bring a specific paper note' is incomplete; adding 'with me' clarifies the meaning and corrects the prepositional usage.