Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes I do, if I make a list it makes shopping easier. Also I don't want to buy unnecessary stuff so it's so helpful.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes I do. I always make a list. Making a list is also means make a goal. So make a list is my motivation and it helps me so much.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Because I think some people dislike make a plan and they live in the moment, I think.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have a smart phone so I can check list anytime and easy to delete list or edit list.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤り("if I make a list it makes shopping easier"は"if I make a list, it makes shopping easier"のようにカンマを入れる)や表現の繰り返しを避けるために、より簡潔で流暢な表現を心がけましょう。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list because it helps me shop more efficiently and avoid buying unnecessary items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 文法の誤り("Making a list is also means make a goal"は不自然)を直し、より明確で自然な表現を使いましょう。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげると流れが良くなります。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list for work because it helps me set clear goals and stay motivated throughout the day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 文法の誤り("dislike make a plan"は"dislike making plans"が正しい)を修正し、理由をより具体的に説明しましょう。また、"I think"の繰り返しは避けてください。
Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to live spontaneously and avoid strict planning.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 文法の誤り("easy to delete list or edit list"は"it's easy to delete or edit the list"が自然)を直し、より流暢で簡潔な表現を使いましょう。
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, and it's easy to check, edit, or delete items whenever I need.
× Making a list is also means make a goal.
✓ Making a list also means making a goal.
The verb 'means' should be followed by a gerund ('making') to indicate the action. Using 'make' (base form) here is incorrect. The correct form is 'means making a goal.'
× So make a list is my motivation and it helps me so much.
✓ So making a list is my motivation and it helps me so much.
The subject should be a gerund phrase 'making a list' rather than the base form 'make a list' to function as a noun in this sentence.
× Because I think some people dislike make a plan and they live in the moment, I think.
✓ Because I think some people dislike making a plan and they live in the moment, I think.
After the verb 'dislike', the gerund form 'making' should be used instead of the base form 'make'. This is a common verb + -ing form rule.
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have a smart phone so I can check list anytime and easy to delete list or edit list.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have a smartphone so I can check the list anytime and it is easy to delete or edit the list.
The phrase 'check list' needs the definite article 'the' before 'list'. Also, 'easy to delete list or edit list' is missing 'it is' and articles before 'list'. Additionally, 'smart phone' should be one word 'smartphone'. These are prepositional and article usage issues.