List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但句子较长且有些重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and prevents me from spending too much on unnecessary items.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“overlook my limitless”不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，并补充具体例子说明。

Exemplo: Yes, I often make lists for my work, especially for long-term projects like preparing for exams. However, sometimes I fail to follow the plan because I underestimate the time needed.

Sugestão: 回答中“approaching that line”表达不清，建议使用更准确的表达方式。同时，连接词使用较好，但可以增加更多具体细节。

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because it makes them feel anxious about deadlines. Also, they prefer to work spontaneously without strict plans.

Sugestão: 回答中“value which one is more important or something like that”表达模糊，建议使用更具体的词汇和句子。可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: I usually prefer making lists on my phone because there are many apps that remind me of important tasks and help me prioritize them.

× Yes, almost every time I go to a supermarket I would bring a list because a list may help me to keep in mind the things I want to buy and it will also remind me that I should control my expense and avoid buying something unnecessary.

✓ Yes, almost every time I go to a supermarket I bring a list because a list may help me to keep in mind the things I want to buy and it will also remind me that I should control my expenses and avoid buying something unnecessary.

这里的“would bring”用法不当，表示习惯动作时应使用一般现在时“bring”。另外，“expense”应为复数形式“expenses”，因为指的是多项开销。

× I usually make a list for my work, especially for a long term project such as the exam. I would pre plan what I should do every day but it doesn't work every time because sometimes I just overlook my limitless.

✓ I usually make a list for my work, especially for a long term project such as the exam. I pre-plan what I should do every day but it doesn't work every time because sometimes I just overlook my limits.

“would pre plan”表达习惯动作时应使用一般现在时“pre-plan”。“limitless”用词错误，应为“limits”，表示“限制”或“界限”。

× The reason why some people dislike making a list, I think it's partially because they don't like the feeling of approaching that line.

✓ The reason why some people dislike making a list, I think, is partially because they don't like the feeling of approaching that line.

句子缺少系动词“is”，导致结构不完整。应在“think”和“it's”之间加“is”以完成句子结构。

× For most of the time I prefer making a list on my phone because nowadays there are various applications on the mobile phone to serve as a reminder.

✓ Most of the time I prefer making a list on my phone because nowadays there are various applications on the mobile phone to serve as reminders.

“For most of the time”应改为“Most of the time”更自然；“a reminder”应改为复数“reminders”，因为“various applications”对应多个提醒。