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Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

Absolutely. It helps me save time and avoid forgetting important things. For instance, for going shopping, I will make a makes a whole process list to make the entire entire shopping.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Almost every single before going to bed, I really write down a list that shows the tasks tasks I need to complete the next day. It helps me keep myself organized and manage my time better.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

I guess because it doesn't align with your personal values and or habits. For example, they might prefer a more flexible flexible approach and letting them working more activity.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

I will go for make a list on my phone like setting alarms with specific names to remind me of important tasks like uh 7:00 PM start studying. It helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在重复和语法错误,影响表达的自然流畅。建议避免重复词汇,简洁表达,并注意语法准确性。

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time and ensures I don't forget anything important.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答中有重复词汇和语法不完整,建议使用完整句子并避免重复,同时可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Almost every night before going to bed, I write a list of tasks I need to complete the next day, which helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在重复和语法错误,表达不够清晰。建议使用准确的词汇和语法,避免重复,并提供更具体的理由。

Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because it doesn't fit their personal habits; they prefer a more flexible approach that allows them to work spontaneously.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 回答中语法不准确且有口语填充词,建议使用完整句子,避免口语化表达,并更清晰地说明理由。

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can set alarms with specific reminders, which helps me stay organized and not forget important tasks.

Gramática

Verb in the present participle form

× For instance, for going shopping, I will make a makes a whole process list to make the entire entire shopping.

For instance, when going shopping, I will make a whole process list to complete the entire shopping.

句中“for going shopping”应改为“when going shopping”更符合表达习惯;“make a makes a”重复且错误,应为“make a”;“entire entire”重复,应去掉一个。整体句子结构调整使表达更清晰。

Singular and plural issue

× Almost every single before going to bed, I really write down a list that shows the tasks tasks I need to complete the next day.

Almost every single night before going to bed, I really write down a list that shows the tasks I need to complete the next day.

“Almost every single”后缺少名词,补充“night”使表达完整;“tasks tasks”重复,应去掉一个。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I guess because it doesn't align with your personal values and or habits.

I guess because it doesn't align with their personal values and/or habits.

句中“your”指代不明确,改为“their”更符合上下文指代他人;“and or”应写为“and/or”表示两者之一。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× For example, they might prefer a more flexible flexible approach and letting them working more activity.

For example, they might prefer a more flexible approach and prefer working more actively.

“flexible flexible”重复,应去掉一个;“letting them working more activity”结构错误,应改为“prefer working more actively”使表达正确且流畅。

Verb + -ing form

× I will go for make a list on my phone like setting alarms with specific names to remind me of important tasks like uh 7:00 PM start studying.

I will go for making a list on my phone, like setting alarms with specific names to remind me of important tasks like '7:00 PM start studying'.

“go for make”搭配错误,应为“go for making”;句中添加逗号和引号使表达更清晰。

Vocabulário

BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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