List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I don't remember and I don't forget anything" which is contradictory. Try to use clearer expressions and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and makes the process easier and more efficient.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and includes examples, but there is a mistake in "avoid buying necessary items" which should be "avoid buying unnecessary items." Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence and avoid minor grammar errors.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important. For instance, by preparing a list, I can shop more efficiently and avoid buying unnecessary items, which makes the process more convenient and stress-free.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to clarify your ideas and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid vague phrases like "they do need a lot of things to buy" which is confusing.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they either have a good memory and can remember what they need, or they prefer to shop spontaneously without planning.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid starting with "So" and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Nowadays, many people prefer to make lists on their phones. I also like using my phone because it's convenient, easy to carry, and allows me to update my list anytime.

× Yes, I make a list before going to the shopping because it is comfortable and easy for me to buy whatever I want and I don't remember and I don't forget anything during my shopping.

✓ Yes, I make a list before going shopping because it is comfortable and easy for me to buy whatever I want and I don't forget anything during my shopping.

The phrase 'going to the shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is an uncountable activity here and does not require the definite article 'the'. The correct phrase is 'going shopping'. Also, 'I don't remember' is unnecessary and confusing in this context, so it is omitted for clarity.

× For example, when I prepare a list, I can shop more efficiently and avoid buying necessary items.

✓ For example, when I prepare a list, I can shop more efficiently and avoid buying unnecessary items.

The phrase 'avoid buying necessary items' is incorrect because 'necessary items' are items you need to buy. The intended meaning is to avoid buying items that are not needed, so 'unnecessary items' is the correct phrase.

× First of all, I think they do need a lot of things to buy.

✓ First of all, I think they do not need a lot of things to buy.

The original sentence contradicts the intended meaning. The phrase 'do need' suggests they require many things, but context implies they do not need many things. Also, 'do need' is affirmative; to express negation, 'do not need' is correct.

× Or they are intelligent and they can remember their old items to buy.

✓ Or they are intelligent and can remember the items they need to buy.

The phrase 'their old items to buy' is awkward and unclear. Using 'the items they need to buy' is clearer and more natural. Also, 'old' is unnecessary here.

× So when they go to the shopping they know what to buy and they know what they need.

✓ So when they go shopping, they know what to buy and what they need.

Similar to the first correction, 'go to the shopping' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'go shopping' without the definite article 'the'. Also, the sentence is improved by removing the repeated 'they know' in the second clause.

× So in today's world, many people prefer to make list on their phone.

✓ So in today's world, many people prefer to make lists on their phones.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists. Also, 'phone' should be plural 'phones' to match 'many people' who each have their own phone.

× Me too like to make list on my phone because it is easy and comfortable to make list and it is easy to carry whenever I want to go.

✓ I also like to make lists on my phone because it is easy and comfortable to make lists and easy to carry whenever I want to go.

The phrase 'Me too like' is incorrect; the subject pronoun 'I' is needed. Also, 'make list' should be 'make lists' for grammatical correctness and consistency. Repetition of 'make list' is corrected to 'make lists' and the sentence is smoothed for clarity.