List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. For example, I like to choose items based on what catches my eye at the store.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat clear but can be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, try to avoid short, choppy sentences and provide a more coherent response.

Exemplo: I usually don't make lists for my work; however, when I have a long project, I prepare by writing my ideas in a list. This helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Please try to give a direct response with clear reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid repetition and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to shop freely. For instance, they might enjoy browsing without being limited to items on a list.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to speak more fluently and use complete sentences. Also, explain your preference clearly with supporting details and linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. This way, I can easily add or remove items whenever needed, unlike paper lists which can be lost or forgotten.

× I not objects and things admire and I do not need to make a list.

✓ I do not admire objects and things and I do not need to make a list.

The original sentence misses the auxiliary verb 'do' before 'not' and misplaces the verb 'admire'. In English, negative sentences in the present tense require 'do not' before the base verb. Also, the verb 'admire' should follow the subject properly. Correcting this improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Some people do not like make a list because they do not prefer to buy things see in a list people at that time people.

✓ Some people do not like to make a list because they do not prefer to buy things seen in a list at that time.

The phrase 'like make' is incorrect; it should be 'like to make' to properly express preference. Also, 'see' should be in the past participle form 'seen' to correctly modify 'things'. The sentence also had redundant and unclear parts which were removed for clarity.

× I make I prefer to make a lace on my on my phone because I do not prefer to make list on paper because I I. I have a phone with me every time and.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I do not prefer to make a list on paper as I have my phone with me all the time.

The original sentence contains repeated words and unclear pronoun usage. 'I make I prefer' is redundant and confusing. Also, 'lace' is a typo for 'list'. The corrected sentence removes repetitions and clarifies pronoun references, improving readability and grammatical accuracy.