List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some minor errors and redundancies. For example, "avoid getting anything important" should be "avoid forgetting anything important." Also, avoid repeating similar ideas like "save time" twice without adding new information. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me save time and ensures I don't forget anything important. Moreover, I often use digital apps on my phone to organize my list more efficiently, which makes shopping more convenient.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but somewhat repetitive and lacks specific details. Phrases like "save time and avoid wasting time" are redundant. Also, "I can do some extra work for me" is unclear. Try to provide clearer reasons and use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks and manage my time effectively. As a result, I can complete my work efficiently and even have time to take on additional projects.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and includes an example, but the sentence structure can be improved for clarity. For instance, "making this" should be "making lists." Also, try to use linking words like "because" and "for example" more effectively to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it stressful and feel restricted by strict plans. For example, they prefer to keep their free time flexible to accommodate personal activities.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and well-structured with good reasons. However, the phrase "makes me harder to focus" should be "makes it harder for me to focus." Also, try to add a linking word like "because" to connect your ideas more smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember things better. Also, using my phone can be distracting due to notifications, which makes it harder for me to focus.

× I find it a better way to save time and avoid getting anything important.

✓ I find it a better way to save time and avoid missing anything important.

The phrase 'avoid getting anything important' is incorrect because 'getting' does not fit the intended meaning. The correct verb is 'missing' to express not forgetting important items. 'Avoid missing anything important' is the proper expression.

× I think it's a very convenient and effective way to help me to save.

✓ I think it's a very convenient and effective way to help me save.

The phrase 'help me to save' is grammatically correct but the infinitive 'to' is unnecessary after 'help' in this context. Omitting 'to' makes the sentence more natural and fluent: 'help me save'.

× This method always helps me save time and avoid wasting time and I can do some extra work for me.

✓ This method always helps me save time and avoid wasting time so I can do some extra work.

The phrase 'I can do some extra work for me' is redundant and incorrect. The reflexive pronoun 'for me' is unnecessary because 'I' is the subject performing the action. Also, connecting the two clauses with 'so' clarifies the cause-effect relationship.

× Some people don't like making this because they find it very stressful or restricted by having to follow a strict plan.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it very stressful or feel restricted by having to follow a strict plan.

The pronoun 'this' is vague and unclear. It should be replaced with the noun 'lists' to specify what is disliked. Also, adding 'feel' before 'restricted' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× For example, they might prefer to be more flexible about their time, especially in their free time, they have some personal things to do.

✓ For example, they might prefer to be more flexible about their time, especially in their free time when they have some personal things to do.

The original sentence incorrectly connects two independent clauses with a comma, causing a comma splice. Replacing the comma with 'when' properly connects the clauses and clarifies the meaning.

× Also, when I use my phone, I often get distracted by notifications or other apps, which makes me harder to focus.

✓ Also, when I use my phone, I often get distracted by notifications or other apps, which makes it harder for me to focus.

The phrase 'makes me harder to focus' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'makes it harder for me to focus' because 'harder' modifies the difficulty of focusing, not the person directly.