List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'definitely make a list' twice. Also, use correct verb forms and articles, for example, say 'I go shopping' instead of 'I go to shopping'. Try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I didn't use to make a list when I went shopping, but now I always make one on my mobile phone. This helps me remember the items I need for my home and myself.

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Use correct grammar and vocabulary, for example, 'I make a list for my work to track what I do and when.' Also, explain how it helps you with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I make a list for my work to keep track of the tasks I complete and the time I spend on them. This is very useful because when my time is scheduled, I can manage my work more efficiently.

Sugestão: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. For example, say 'Some people don't like making lists because they are very busy or have monotonous schedules.' Also, give a specific example clearly. Use linking words like 'for example' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they are very busy or have repetitive routines. For example, my uncle is so busy with work that he never makes a list for himself.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your sentences and explain your preference with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can access it anytime and anywhere.'

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it is very convenient. I can easily create and check my lists whenever and wherever I am.

× In the past I did not make any list when I go to the shop, but now I definitely make list when I go to shopping and buy some items for my home and for myself.

✓ In the past I did not make any lists when I went to the shop, but now I definitely make a list when I go shopping and buy some items for my home and for myself.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring to any list in general. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. The verb tense should be consistent: 'did not make' (past) pairs with 'went' (past).

× Then I definitely make a list on mobile phone.

✓ Then I definitely make a list on my mobile phone.

The phrase 'on mobile phone' is missing the possessive pronoun 'my' to specify whose mobile phone it is. This is a common error in English usage.

× I make list for my work when I what time I did my work and also what I do on UH on that time.

✓ I make a list for my work about what time I did my work and also what I did at that time.

The word 'list' should be preceded by the article 'a' to indicate a singular countable noun. The sentence also has unclear parts; 'what I do on UH on that time' is corrected to 'what I did at that time' for clarity and tense consistency.

× And it also very useful for me because if my time is scheduled then it is easy for me to make my work properly.

✓ And it is also very useful for me because if my time is scheduled, then it is easy for me to do my work properly.

The verb 'is' was missing after 'it' to form the correct sentence. Also, 'make my work' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'do my work'.

× Because mostly people are very busy in their life or due due to their monotonous schedule they do not have proper time to make list and my for example my uncle are very busy on their work they they never make any list for their self.

✓ Because most people are very busy in their lives or due to their monotonous schedules, they do not have proper time to make lists. For example, my uncle is very busy with his work and he never makes any list for himself.

'Mostly people' should be 'most people'. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' when referring to multiple people. 'Make list' should be 'make lists'. 'My uncle are' should be 'my uncle is' for subject-verb agreement. 'Their self' should be 'himself' as a reflexive pronoun referring to a singular male.

× I make list on my mobile phone because it is very convenient for me and I easily make it and whenever where uh.

✓ I make lists on my mobile phone because it is very convenient for me and I can easily make them whenever I want.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' to indicate plural. The sentence was incomplete and unclear; 'whenever where uh' is corrected to 'whenever I want' for clarity and correctness.