List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'I make the list in my brain' and 'it's not something that we can see.' Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence and correct minor grammar errors such as 'I do make list' should be 'I do make a list.'

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list in my mind rather than writing it down. This helps me remember what I need without carrying a paper or phone.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific details. Also, avoid informal contractions like 'cause' and use linking words such as 'because' or 'since' for better coherence.

Exemplo: I don't usually make lists for my assignments, but I do create daily study plans because, as a high school student, managing my time helps me meet deadlines effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical errors. Avoid contradictory phrases like 'but however' and clarify your points. Also, avoid labeling others negatively ('lazy people'). Instead, explain reasons why some might dislike lists with specific details and linking words.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find the process time-consuming and complicated. However, I believe lists are helpful for staying organized.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your preference clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid confusing phrases like 'on the promise that' and 'instead of paperless.' Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I use it most of the time and don't want to carry extra paper with me.

× So in essence, I do make list, but it's not something that we can see.

✓ So in essence, I do make lists, but it's not something that we can see.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because the context implies multiple items or instances of lists, matching the earlier plural usage and maintaining consistency.

× I'm the not the kind of people that likes to make lists 'cause I think writing things down or managing things are quite a complex process that we need to overcome.

✓ I'm not the kind of person that likes to make lists 'cause I think writing things down or managing things is quite a complex process that we need to overcome.

'People' is plural, but the phrase 'the kind of' requires a singular noun 'person' here. Also, 'writing things down or managing things' is treated as a singular complex process, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'.

× If I have to make a plan on the promise that right now people are using their phone for there most of the time and I don't want to carry another paper while I'm doing something, I tend to change that to list the checklist on my phone instead of paperless.

✓ If I have to make a plan on the premise that right now people are using their phones for most of the time and I don't want to carry another paper while I'm doing something, I tend to change that to listing the checklist on my phone instead of paper.

The word 'promise' should be 'premise' to convey the intended meaning. 'Their phone' should be 'their phones' to agree in number with 'people'. 'There' is incorrect and should be removed. 'Change that to list the checklist' is awkward; 'change that to listing the checklist' is correct. 'Instead of paperless' is incorrect; it should be 'instead of paper'.