Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I usually make a list when I shop in 'cause it will give me more instructions and then I'll know what to do and what to purchase and the plan make everything understandable.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
I usually make a list of my work, but actually it doesn't work always because I won't obey those lists and I just call it what you want and do whatever I want.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Maybe because making this make them feel under pressure? The list gives us an instruction of what to do.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my because it's easy to check out. When I write a list on paper, I usually just can't find the paper when I decided to obey the things I written on the list.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and clear by directly stating that you make a list to stay organized and remember what to buy. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.
Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains informal expressions. Try to clearly explain that although you make work lists, you sometimes don't follow them strictly. Use linking words to improve coherence.
Exemplo: I usually make a to-do list for my work, but sometimes I don't follow it strictly because I prefer to prioritize tasks as I go.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: Your answer is brief and has grammatical mistakes. Provide a clearer explanation with specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas.
Exemplo: Some people might dislike making lists because they feel pressured by having strict instructions, which can make them anxious.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Specify that you prefer using your phone because it's convenient and you don't lose the list. Use linking words to connect your ideas.
Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easy to access and I don't have to worry about losing the paper list.
× Yes, I usually make a list when I shop in 'cause it will give me more instructions and then I'll know what to do and what to purchase and the plan make everything understandable.
✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it will give me more instructions and then I'll know what to do and what to purchase, and the plan makes everything understandable.
The phrase 'shop in' is incorrect; the preposition 'in' should be removed. Also, 'the plan make' should be 'the plan makes' to agree with the singular subject 'plan'. The word 'cause' is informal and should be 'because' for clarity.
× Yes, I usually make a list when I shop in 'cause it will give me more instructions and then I'll know what to do and what to purchase and the plan make everything understandable.
✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it will give me more instructions and then I'll know what to do and what to purchase, and the plan makes everything understandable.
The verb 'make' does not agree with the singular subject 'plan'. It should be 'makes' to maintain subject-verb agreement.
× I usually make a list of my work, but actually it doesn't work always because I won't obey those lists and I just call it what you want and do whatever I want.
✓ I usually make a list of my work, but actually it doesn't always work because I don't always follow those lists and I just call it whatever I want and do whatever I want.
The modal verb 'won't' is incorrectly used here; 'won't obey' implies future refusal, but the intended meaning is habitual non-compliance, so 'don't always follow' is more appropriate. Also, 'call it what you want' should be 'call it whatever you want' for correct idiomatic expression.
× I usually make a list of my work, but actually it doesn't work always because I won't obey those lists and I just call it what you want and do whatever I want.
✓ I usually make a list of my work, but actually it doesn't always work because I don't always follow those lists and I just call it whatever I want and do whatever I want.
The phrase 'work always' is awkward; 'always' should be placed before 'work' to form 'always work'. Also, 'obey those lists' is not idiomatic; 'follow those lists' is the correct collocation.
× Maybe because making this make them feel under pressure? The list gives us an instruction of what to do.
✓ Maybe because making this makes them feel under pressure? The list gives us instructions on what to do.
'Making this make' should be 'making this makes' to agree with the singular subject. Also, 'an instruction of' is incorrect; 'instructions on' is the correct prepositional phrase.
× Maybe because making this make them feel under pressure? The list gives us an instruction of what to do.
✓ Maybe because making this makes them feel under pressure? The list gives us instructions on what to do.
The verb 'make' does not agree with the singular subject 'making this'. It should be 'makes' to maintain subject-verb agreement.
× I prefer to make a list on my because it's easy to check out. When I write a list on paper, I usually just can't find the paper when I decided to obey the things I written on the list.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easy to check. When I write a list on paper, I usually just can't find the paper when I decide to follow the things I have written on the list.
The phrase 'on my' is incomplete; it should be 'on my phone'. 'Check out' is informal and unnecessary here; 'check' is sufficient. 'Decided' should be present tense 'decide' to match the context. 'Obey the things' is incorrect; 'follow the things' is more appropriate. 'I written' should be 'I have written' to use the present perfect tense correctly.