List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, use correct verb forms and plural nouns, for example, 'special somethings' should be 'special things'. Keep your answer concise and directly address the question with a clear structure.

Exemplo: It depends. Sometimes, when I need to buy special things, I make a list beforehand. However, other times I just browse the supermarket and buy whatever I need.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'so' or 'therefore'. Also, be specific about how the list helps you.

Exemplo: Yes, I often make a list before I start my work to avoid forgetting anything. Then, I check the list at the end of the day, so it helps me stay organised and complete all my tasks.

Sugestão: Use more natural phrasing and correct prepositions, for example, 'trust their brain' instead of 'trust to their brain'. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas clearly.

Exemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory more than writing things down, so they believe they won't forget anything.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and word choice, for example, say 'a better feeling' instead of 'better feel', and 'digital device' instead of 'digital instrument'. Also, clarify your opinion with reasons and use linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer to make a list on paper because writing gives me a better feeling than using a digital device. Moreover, I think it's better not to use a mobile phone too much nowadays.

× sometimes I go shopping to buy special somethings and umm so uh, before that I do a list

✓ sometimes I go shopping to buy special something and umm so uh, before that I make a list

The word 'somethings' is incorrect because 'something' is an uncountable pronoun and does not have a plural form. Also, 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'.

× other times I just browsing the supermarket and I buy

✓ other times I just browse the supermarket and I buy

The verb 'browsing' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is the base verb 'browse' after 'I just'.

× I often make a list beforehand I start my work umm to avoid forgetting anything

✓ I often make a list before I start my work umm to avoid forgetting anything

The phrase 'beforehand I start my work' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'before I start my work'. 'Beforehand' is an adverb and does not fit here.

× and at the end of the time I check my list and umm it

✓ and at the end of the time I check my list and umm it helps me

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb after 'and umm it'. Adding 'helps me' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× because they trust to their brain more than writing on the paper

✓ because they trust their brain more than writing on paper

The verb 'trust' does not require the preposition 'to'. Also, 'writing on the paper' is better as 'writing on paper' in this context.

× they think that they don't forget anything and can remember all things correctly

✓ they think that they don't forget anything and can remember everything correctly

'All things' is less natural here; 'everything' is the correct pronoun to refer to all items collectively.

× I prefer to make a list on a paper because writing gives better feel to me than digital instrument

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because writing gives a better feel to me than a digital instrument

'On a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct phrase. Also, 'better feel' needs the article 'a' before it. 'Digital instrument' requires the article 'a' as well.

× nowadays I think it's better that don't use mobile

✓ nowadays I think it's better not to use a mobile phone

The phrase 'that don't use mobile' is incorrect. The correct form is 'not to use a mobile phone'. Also, 'mobile' should be 'mobile phone' for clarity.