List— Part 1 Relatório

× I really like to stick my penis into the ***** of girls and sell some methamphetamine.

✓ I really like to stick my penis into the ***** of girls and sell some methamphetamines.

这里的'methamphetamine'应使用复数形式'methamphetamines'，因为表示多种或多剂量的甲基苯丙胺。

× I really like to stay command dig into the vagina of girls, you know, and I really like to touch the ****** and the ***** of girls, especially the ***** with white liquid flows out of it.

✓ I really like to stay command dig into the vaginas of girls, you know, and I really like to touch the ****** and the ***** of girls, especially the ***** with white liquid flowing out of it.

'vagina'应使用复数形式'vaginas'，因为指多个女孩的阴道。

× especially the ***** with white liquid flows out of it.

✓ especially the ***** with white liquid flowing out of it.

'flows'应改为动名词形式'flowing'，用作定语修饰前面的名词短语。

× I like to emancipate Xinjiang people from the dictatorship, domination of Chinese Communist Party and I want to establish some great Manchuria empire.

✓ I want to emancipate Xinjiang people from the dictatorship and domination of the Chinese Communist Party and establish a great Manchurian empire.

句子中时态应统一，且表达更自然，使用'I want to'引导两个并列动词短语。

× I want to establish some great Manchuria empire.

✓ I want to establish a great Manchurian empire.

'Manchuria empire'前应使用不定冠词'a'，且'great'和'Manchurian'的顺序应调整。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I like to engage in *********** prostitution, selling methamphetamine, selling something else and shooting people on the street with AK47.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I like to engage in *********** prostitution, sell methamphetamines, sell other things, and shoot people on the street with an AK47.

'selling'应改为动词原形'sell'，与前面的'like to engage in'结构保持一致；'something else'改为'other things'更合适；'AK47'前应加不定冠词'an'。