List— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yeah, I usually make a list when I am shopping. I usually make a list before because I want to buy something I need. If I don't make a list, I will buy something not indispensable.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Definitely. I often make a list for my work. It contains what I need to learn and what task I will do. Only in this list I find I can remember what I should do and it helps me a lot.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
As for some people, they may like to do the things by themselves, they like the feeling of freedom, they may sometimes do something they want to not in the frame.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I use my phone every day and I take it on my side, so it's very convenient for me to use the phones. And apart from this, I love typing rather than writing.
Avaliação
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Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语言有些重复且不够自然。建议避免重复使用“usually make a list”，并且用更地道的表达方式来说明原因。
Exemplo: Yes, I usually prepare a shopping list beforehand to ensure I only buy what I really need. Without a list, I tend to purchase unnecessary items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构有些混乱。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，并用连接词使表达更连贯。
Exemplo: Definitely, I often make a list for my work, which includes tasks I need to complete and topics I need to study. This helps me remember my responsibilities and improves my efficiency.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连接词。建议用更简洁明了的句子表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and enjoy the freedom to do things their own way without restrictions.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答较为自然，但有些表达不够地道，如“take it on my side”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意单复数一致。
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I carry it with me all the time, which makes it very convenient. Besides, I enjoy typing more than writing by hand.
Gramática
× If I don't make a list, I will buy something not indispensable.
✓ If I don't make a list, I will buy something that is not indispensable.
这里缺少了关系代词和动词，导致句子不完整。应补充"that is"使句子完整，表达清楚。
× It contains what I need to learn and what task I will do.
✓ It contains what I need to learn and what tasks I will do.
"task"应使用复数形式"tasks"，因为通常工作中有多个任务。
× Only in this list I find I can remember what I should do and it helps me a lot.
✓ Only with this list do I find that I can remember what I should do, and it helps me a lot.
句子结构不正确，缺少倒装和连接词"that"，应调整语序并加上"that"使句子通顺。
× As for some people, they may like to do the things by themselves, they like the feeling of freedom, they may sometimes do something they want to not in the frame.
✓ As for some people, they may like to do things by themselves because they like the feeling of freedom; sometimes they do things they want to, not within a frame.
原句逗号连接多个分句，造成句子结构混乱，应使用连词和分号分开句子，并调整表达使其更自然。
× so it's very convenient for me to use the phones.
✓ so it's very convenient for me to use the phone.
这里指的是手机，应该用单数形式"phone"，而不是复数"phones"。
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