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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

Yes I do at least can help me remember what should I buy in the shop and and that's and that way I couldn't I I cannot forget the thing I should buy.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Yes, I like to make A to do list before I start my my work. It is. It is an approach to help me arrange arrange my tasks properly and save time.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

Maybe making a list isn't their habit because it costs spare time and costs other time for talk.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

I prefer to make a list on my phone. It is a more convenient approach. So every time I want to, I want to know what should I do the next. I just need to take out of my phone and check the list.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 你的回答有些语法错误和重复,表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更自然的表达方式。

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and prevents me from forgetting anything.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 回答中有重复词汇,句子结构不够连贯。建议使用连贯的句子,并适当使用连接词使表达更自然。

Exemplo: Yes, I like to make a to-do list before starting work because it helps me organize my tasks efficiently and save time.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 表达不够清晰,语法错误较多。建议用更准确的词汇表达原因,并且句子结构要完整。

Exemplo: Some people may not like making lists because it takes extra time and they prefer to rely on memory or spontaneous planning.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误,表达不够流畅。建议简化句子,避免重复,并使用更自然的表达方式。

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. Whenever I want to check my tasks, I just take out my phone and look at the list.

Gramática

Sentence structure errors

× Yes I do at least can help me remember what should I buy in the shop and and that's and that way I couldn't I I cannot forget the thing I should buy.

Yes, I do. At least it can help me remember what I should buy in the shop, and that way I cannot forget the things I should buy.

原句结构混乱,缺少必要的标点符号,导致句子难以理解。应分成几个完整的句子,并调整语序,使表达更清晰。

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I like to make A to do list before I start my my work. It is. It is an approach to help me arrange arrange my tasks properly and save time.

Yes, I like to make a to-do list before I start my work. It is an approach to help me arrange my tasks properly and save time.

句子中有重复词汇(my my, arrange arrange)和不完整句子(It is.),需要删除重复词并合并句子,使表达连贯。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Maybe making a list isn't their habit because it costs spare time and costs other time for talk.

Maybe making a list isn't their habit because it takes spare time and also time for talking.

动词搭配错误,'costs spare time'应改为'takes spare time','costs other time for talk'表达不自然,应改为'time for talking'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to make a list on my phone. It is a more convenient approach. So every time I want to, I want to know what should I do the next. I just need to take out of my phone and check the list.

I prefer to make a list on my phone. It is a more convenient approach. So every time I want to know what I should do next, I just need to take out my phone and check the list.

'take out of my phone'用法错误,应为'take out my phone';'what should I do the next'语序错误,应为'what I should do next'。

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