List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Use present tense consistently and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify your points with linking words and specific details. For example, explain why making a list helps you and what kind of things you include.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember important items. For instance, I list groceries and household essentials to avoid forgetting anything. This way, I save time and avoid unnecessary purchases.

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how the list helps you at work. Also, correct grammar mistakes and use plural forms where needed.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because sometimes I forget important tasks. Therefore, having a list is very beneficial as it helps me stay organized and complete my duties on time.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but can be more coherent and natural. Use linking words and avoid repeating words. Also, explain the reason more clearly and add examples if possible.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists on paper because they prefer using their mobile phones to note things. For example, using apps on phones is more convenient and environmentally friendly, so they avoid paper lists.

Sugestão: Your answer should be more concise and structured. Use linking words to compare both methods and explain your preference clearly. Also, correct grammar and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: I prefer both methods depending on the situation. If I don't have my phone, I use paper lists because they are reliable. However, nowadays I mostly use my mobile phone since it is convenient and easy to update.

× Yes, usually I make a list whenever I went to market.

✓ Yes, usually I make a list whenever I go to the market.

The sentence mixes present tense 'make' with past tense 'went'. Since 'usually' indicates a habitual action, the present tense 'go' should be used instead of past tense 'went'. Also, 'the market' requires the definite article 'the'.

× So that time I make a list of tour member the things because sometimes I forget the things which is important.

✓ So that time I make a list of your members' things because sometimes I forget the things which are important.

The phrase 'tour member the things' is unclear and likely intended as 'your members' things'. Also, 'things which is important' should be 'things which are important' to agree in number with the plural 'things'.

× So that's why I make a list for my safety.

✓ So that's why I make a list for my safety.

This sentence is correct in present tense and needs no correction.

× Of course, yes, I make a list for my work because sometime, sometime I forget the thing.

✓ Of course, yes, I make a list for my work because sometimes I forget things.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'the thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context.

× So that's why I make a list for my work.

✓ So that's why I make a list for my work.

This sentence is correct in present tense and needs no correction.

× It's work too because it's very beneficial for me and it helps me to remember the things what I have to do that time.

✓ It works too because it's very beneficial for me and it helps me to remember the things I have to do at that time.

The phrase 'It's work' should be 'It works' to agree with third person singular. Also, 'what I have to do that time' should be 'I have to do at that time' for correct relative clause and preposition usage.

× Oh, well, I think some people don't like making a list because they have a phone.

✓ Oh, well, I think some people don't like making a list because they have phones.

The plural 'phones' is more appropriate here as it refers to people generally having phones. However, this is more a singular/plural issue, but since 'have' is correct for plural subject, no modal verb correction is needed. So this sentence is acceptable.

× They can write the things on their mobile phones that they they don't want to make a list on and on the paper.

✓ They can write things on their mobile phones, so they don't want to make a list on paper.

The phrase 'that they they don't want to make a list on and on the paper' is awkward and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'so they don't want to make a list on paper'. Also, 'the things' can be simplified to 'things'.

× Well, I prefer both.

✓ Well, I prefer both.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× Well if I talk about list on paper so it's beneficial and whenever I have not my personal mobile phone so that time I use paper for my work.

✓ Well, if I talk about lists on paper, it's beneficial, and whenever I don't have my personal mobile phone, I use paper for my work at that time.

The phrase 'if I talk about list on paper' should be 'if I talk about lists on paper' (plural). 'Whenever I have not my personal mobile phone' is incorrect; it should be 'whenever I don't have my personal mobile phone'. Also, 'so that time' should be 'at that time'.

× But nowadays I use my mobile phone to make a list.

✓ But nowadays I use my mobile phone to make a list.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.