List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then explain why you make a list. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it keeps my shopping within budget since I only buy the items on the list.

Sugestão: Your answer should be more fluent and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then explain how making a list helps you. Use linking words like 'firstly' and 'because' properly to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work every morning. Firstly, I write down all the tasks I need to complete because it helps me stay organized and remember important duties throughout the day.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant words. Focus on the question by explaining reasons why some people avoid making lists. Use clear sentences and linking words like 'because' or 'if'.

Exemplo: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time. Also, if they have a good memory, they may feel they don't need reminders.

Sugestão: Your answer should be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear preference, then explain why. Use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I often forget paper lists at home. Using my phone allows me to check the list anytime while shopping.

× They're important I and I don't forget that What can I what thing I can buy and it's my budget friendly because I only buy only these things.

✓ They are important, and I don't forget what things I can buy. It is budget-friendly because I only buy these things.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and unclear phrasing. It combines multiple ideas without proper connectors, making it confusing. The correction separates ideas into clear sentences and uses appropriate conjunctions for clarity.

× Yes, I make a list for my work when I was wake up.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work when I wake up.

The phrase 'when I was wake up' incorrectly uses past tense 'was' with 'wake up'. The correct form is simple present tense 'wake up' to indicate a habitual action.

× Firstly I make a list. What can I do for whole day? Because it's very important to a person that it can be a rememberable 2 things.

✓ Firstly, I make a list of what I can do for the whole day because it is very important for a person to remember things.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Rememberable 2 things' is incorrect and unclear. The correction combines ideas into a coherent sentence and uses correct vocabulary and structure.

× According to me, some people don't like to make English because it's it's their choice.

✓ According to me, some people don't like to make lists because it is their choice.

The phrase 'don't like to make English' is incorrect and likely a misstatement. The pronoun 'it' is repeated unnecessarily. The correction replaces 'English' with 'lists' to fit context and removes repetition.

× Some people believe they are a waste of time and if they are a good memory and a good memorable person, a reminder person what they can do and what and they are member what they can.

✓ Some people believe lists are a waste of time, and if they have a good memory, they can remember what they need to do without reminders.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing with incorrect word choices like 'member' instead of 'remember'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects vocabulary and sentence structure.

× I always prefer to make a list on my phone because sometimes I when I make a list on paper I forget in my home so so that's why I that I make up a list on my phone because I will check on my phone what can I buy or what can.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on my phone because sometimes when I make a list on paper, I forget it at home. That is why I make a list on my phone so I can check what I can buy.

The original sentence misuses prepositions like 'forget in my home' instead of 'forget it at home'. It also has redundant and unclear phrases. The correction uses correct prepositions and simplifies the sentence for clarity.