List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'I usually made lists because it is easier for me to buy anything whatever I want and sometimes I forget but list help me to remind it,' you can say, 'I usually make lists because they help me remember what to buy, especially since I sometimes forget items.'

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need. Moreover, it saves time by preventing unnecessary purchases.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but needs better sentence structure and clarity. Avoid repetition like 'lists are making lists.' Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say, 'Yes, I usually make lists on my mobile phone before going to work, which helps me remember tasks such as assignments and manage my time effectively.'

Exemplo: Yes, I often create lists on my phone before work because they help me organise my tasks. For instance, I list my assignments and set a timetable to complete them on time.

Sugestão: Your answer covers both views but can be improved by using clearer sentence structures and linking words like 'however' and 'therefore.' Also, avoid vague phrases like 'whatever they want to do.' Instead, be specific. For example, 'Some people dislike making lists because they consider it time-consuming; however, others find lists helpful for organising tasks and remembering important duties.'

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time. However, others find lists very useful as they help organise tasks and remember important responsibilities.

Sugestão: Your answer has good points but needs grammatical corrections and clearer expression. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to connect ideas. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and secure. Paper lists can be easily lost or damaged, whereas digital lists are safer and easier to access.'

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and secure. Paper lists can get lost or damaged, but digital lists are always accessible and easy to update.

× I usually made lists because it is easier for me to buy anything whatever I want and sometimes I forget but list help me to remind it.

✓ I usually make lists because it is easier for me to buy anything I want and sometimes I forget but lists help me to remember it.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'made' (past tense) instead of 'make' (present tense) which is appropriate here as the student is describing a habitual action. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' to agree with the context, and 'help me to remind it' is incorrect; it should be 'help me to remember it' because 'remind' requires an object who is reminded, whereas 'remember' means to recall something oneself.

× I usually made lists because it is easier for me to buy anything whatever I want and sometimes I forget but list help me to remind it.

✓ I usually make lists because it is easier for me to buy anything I want and sometimes I forget but lists help me to remember it.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' to agree with the plural subject and verb 'help'. Singular 'list' with plural verb 'help' causes subject-verb disagreement.

× sometimes I forget but list help me to remind it.

✓ sometimes I forget but lists help me to remember it.

'Remind it' is incorrect because 'remind' requires a person as the object, not 'it'. The correct verb here is 'remember' which means to recall something oneself.

× Yes, I usually make list for my work and it works very well because I think lists are making lists is very important nowadays and I usually make lists on my mobile phone but whenever I went to work.

✓ Yes, I usually make lists for my work and it works very well because I think making lists is very important nowadays and I usually make lists on my mobile phone whenever I go to work.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to match the plural context. Also, 'lists are making lists' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists' as a gerund phrase. 'Whenever I went to work' should be 'whenever I go to work' to maintain present tense consistency.

× but whenever I went to work.

✓ but whenever I go to work.

The phrase 'whenever I went to work' uses past tense 'went' which is inconsistent with the present habitual action described. It should be present tense 'go'.

× So it is very beneficial for me to remind whatever I want to do.

✓ So it is very beneficial for me to remember whatever I want to do.

'Remind' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'remember' because the subject is recalling tasks themselves, not reminding someone else.

× Some people find it difficult to make lists. They think this is a waste of time so they don't like to make it.

✓ Some people find it difficult to make lists. They think this is a waste of time so they don't like to make them.

'Make it' is incorrect because 'lists' is plural; the pronoun should be plural 'them' to agree with 'lists'.

× But on the other hand, some people like to make list like it helps to improve their task as well as also help to remind whatever they want to do.

✓ But on the other hand, some people like to make lists because it helps to improve their tasks as well as helps to remind them whatever they want to do.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to agree with the plural context. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'their'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Help to remind' should be 'helps to remind them' for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× But on the other hand, some people like to make list like it helps to improve their task as well as also help to remind whatever they want to do.

✓ But on the other hand, some people like to make lists because it helps to improve their tasks as well as helps to remind them whatever they want to do.

'Remind' requires an object who is reminded; 'them' is necessary here to indicate the people being reminded.

× Well, I prefer to make list on phone because in this current era it is convenient method and it is very beneficial because nowadays paper lists are very unuseful because sometimes they fall from our pocket or sometimes it lost.

✓ Well, I prefer to make lists on my phone because in this current era it is a convenient method and it is very beneficial because nowadays paper lists are very useless because sometimes they fall from our pocket or sometimes they get lost.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to agree with the context. 'On phone' should be 'on my phone' for clarity. 'Convenient method' needs an article 'a'. 'Unuseful' is incorrect; the correct word is 'useless'. 'Sometimes it lost' is incorrect; it should be 'sometimes they get lost' to agree with plural 'lists' and correct verb form.

× sometimes it lost.

✓ sometimes they get lost.

'It' is incorrect because the subject 'lists' is plural; the pronoun should be 'they'. Also, 'lost' needs an auxiliary verb 'get' to form the passive voice correctly.