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Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because in my opinion it helps me stay organized and ensure that I don't forget any important items.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Yes, I'll make a list before I work, before I work and the most, and then I will try my best to finish it, not only write down dance. Yeah.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

In my opinions, I think some someone disliked making this because they found it complex and they prefer a more spontaneous approach to organizing their tests.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

Well, I prefer to. I prefer to write down on paper on my list rather than on phone because I think write down on papers can help me organizing clearly because I can watch it.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.5Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.5Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 5.5

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Pontuação: 85.0

Sugestão: 你的回答表达清晰且结构合理,但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅,例如使用“because”后可以加上“so that”来连接原因和结果。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized so that I don't forget any important items.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Pontuação: 40.0

Sugestão: 你的回答不够清晰,语法和表达存在错误,建议简化句子结构,直接回答问题并补充具体细节。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list before I start working, and I try my best to complete all the tasks on the list.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当,建议使用更准确的词汇并简化句子,同时提供更具体的理由。

Exemplo: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it complicated and prefer to organize their tasks spontaneously.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误,建议简化表达并使用正确的语法,同时说明具体原因。

Exemplo: I prefer to write my list on paper rather than on my phone because it helps me organize my thoughts more clearly and I can see everything at once.

Gramática

Past tense issue

× Yes, I'll make a list before I work, before I work and the most, and then I will try my best to finish it, not only write down dance. Yeah.

Yes, I make a list before I work, and then I try my best to finish it, not only write down tasks.

这里使用了将来时态(I'll make),但根据上下文,描述的是习惯性动作,应使用一般现在时。此外,句子中有语义不清和多余部分,需简化表达。建议使用一般现在时描述习惯行为。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× In my opinions, I think some someone disliked making this because they found it complex and they prefer a more spontaneous approach to organizing their tests.

In my opinion, I think some people dislike making lists because they find it complex and prefer a more spontaneous approach to organizing their tasks.

“opinions”应为单数“opinion”,表示个人观点;“some someone”错误,应为“some people”;“disliked”时态错误,应为一般现在时“dislike”,因为描述的是普遍现象;“this”指代不明,应改为“lists”;“tests”应为“tasks”,更符合语境。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Well, I prefer to. I prefer to write down on paper on my list rather than on phone because I think write down on papers can help me organizing clearly because I can watch it.

Well, I prefer to write my list on paper rather than on my phone because I think writing on paper can help me organize clearly since I can see it.

“write down on paper on my list”表达混乱,应为“write my list on paper”;“on phone”应为“on my phone”;“write down on papers”应为“writing on paper”;“help me organizing”应为“help me organize”;“watch it”用词不当,应为“see it”。这些都是介词和动词形式的错误。

Vocabulário

BestFinest; To the highest standard
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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