Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes I do because the list can help me remember what's the things I want to buy and it is a good way to shows to others what I want to bring.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
No, I don't because I think it is useless. It doesn't work.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Because they should be not usually remember the things, so they want to make a list to remember what they want to do.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my because I can use those anywhere to look my list.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“what's the things”应为“what things”,且“shows to others”表达不准确。建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,同时注意语法正确。
Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need to buy and also lets others know what I want to get.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答过于简短且缺乏具体理由,表达不够自然。建议给出更详细的解释,并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Exemplo: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I prefer to keep things in my mind, and I find that lists don't help me stay organized effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答语法混乱,逻辑不清,且内容与问题不符。建议先明确回答问题,再用具体理由支持,注意句子结构和逻辑连贯。
Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory and feel that lists are unnecessary or time-consuming.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 回答不完整且语法错误,如“on my”缺少名词,“look my list”应为“look at my list”。建议完整表达观点并注意语法。
Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can access them anywhere and it's more convenient than using paper.
× Yes I do because the list can help me remember what's the things I want to buy and it is a good way to shows to others what I want to bring.
✓ Yes, I do because the list can help me remember the things I want to buy and it is a good way to show others what I want to bring.
这里的错误是名词单复数问题。'what's the things'中'what's'是'what is'的缩写,后面接复数名词'things'不匹配,应去掉'is'。另外,'shows'应改为原形动词'show',因为主语是单数名词'way',后面用不带s的动词不正确。建议注意名词单复数和动词形式的搭配。
× No, I don't because I think it is useless. It doesn't work.
✓ No, I don't because I think it is useless. It doesn't work.
这句话语法正确,没有违反模态动词使用规则。
× Because they should be not usually remember the things, so they want to make a list to remember what they want to do.
✓ Because they usually do not need to remember things, so they want to make a list to remember what they want to do.
这里的错误是模态动词和助动词的错误使用。'should be not usually remember'结构不正确,应该用'usually do not need to remember'表达否定的习惯动作。建议学习正确的否定句型和助动词用法。
× I prefer to make a list on my because I can use those anywhere to look my list.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can use it anywhere to look at my list.
这里缺少名词,'on my'后面应加名词'phone'。另外,'use those'应改为'use it',因为指代单数名词。'look my list'应改为'look at my list',动词'look'后面需要介词'at'。建议注意介词搭配和代词指代的一致性。