Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Well, it usually depends on how many items I need to buy. If I need to buy lots of things, I will definitely make a list to make sure I don't forget anything important. However, if I only need a few things, I often skip making a list because I have.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Oh, I am a student so I don't have work. If you say my work, I think it's about my homework and I often make a list. Yes, because I think it can make me study more efficiently and it works well.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think it's because making leads is too difficult and sometimes it's necessary. For instance, if you are doing a thing that's simple, you don't need to make a list.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
It depends on the place because sometimes when I'm at school I can't use my cell so I make a list on the paper. When I'm at home I use the cell to make lists because it's more convenient.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答时应避免句子未完成的情况,保持语言完整和连贯。同时,回答可以更自然简洁,避免重复表达。
Exemplo: I usually make a list when I have many items to buy to avoid forgetting anything important. But if I only need a few things, I tend to shop without a list because it's easy to remember.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答应更直接,避免重复和不必要的解释。可以用更丰富的词汇表达观点,使回答更自然流畅。
Exemplo: As a student, I often make lists for my homework. This helps me organize my tasks better and study more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中出现了拼写错误(leads应为lists),且表达不够清晰。建议用更准确的词汇和句子结构表达原因,并举具体例子。
Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or unnecessary, especially for simple tasks that are easy to remember.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: 回答较好,但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅,同时丰富词汇表达。
Exemplo: It depends on where I am. When I'm at school, I prefer making lists on paper since I can't use my phone. However, at home, I find it more convenient to use my phone for making lists.
× I often skip making a list because I have.
✓ I often skip making a list because I don't have many things to buy.
句子中“because I have”不完整,缺少宾语,导致表达不清。应补充完整,说明缺少购物物品的数量。
× I think it's because making leads is too difficult and sometimes it's necessary.
✓ I think it's because making lists is too difficult and sometimes unnecessary.
原句中“making leads”应为“making lists”,且“sometimes it's necessary”与句意不符,应为“sometimes unnecessary”,表示有时不需要。
× When I'm at school I can't use my cell so I make a list on the paper.
✓ When I'm at school, I can't use my cell phone, so I make a list on paper.
“my cell”应完整为“my cell phone”,且“on the paper”应为“on paper”,表示在纸上。
× When I'm at home I use the cell to make lists because it's more convenient.
✓ When I'm at home, I use my cell phone to make lists because it's more convenient.
“the cell”应为“my cell phone”,更符合口语表达习惯。