Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
I nearly never made a decision because my MBTI is ENFP. That means I usually make decision immediately. I'm emotionally owned and I always not make. I always don't make a decision in advance.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Sometimes I will make a decision for my work. For example, when an exam is near, I usually make a plan for. Review my notes and completing my homework and so on.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
In my opinion, they may prefer to make a decision more emotionally and immediately. That focus on their feelings and make a plan may cause a lot of other things. For example, we don't.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient. When you need to check your list, you just need to open your phone and you will know what will you do next. But if you use a paper, it will easy to be broken.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 你的回答缺乏针对问题的直接回应,句子结构混乱且语法错误较多,表达不够自然。建议回答时直接说明是否会列购物清单,并用简洁明了的句子表达观点,避免使用不相关的心理类型信息。
Exemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I feel I need at the moment.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中表达的意思不够清晰,句子不完整且缺少连贯的连接词。建议直接回答是否会为工作列清单,并用完整句子描述具体做法,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work. For example, before an exam, I plan to review my notes and complete my homework to prepare well.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 回答内容不够具体,句子结构混乱且缺少逻辑连贯性。建议明确说明原因,使用具体例子和连接词,使回答更有条理。
Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to make decisions based on their feelings and enjoy spontaneity, which makes planning feel restrictive to them.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但部分句子表达不够准确,语法有小错误。建议注意句子结构和时态,使用更准确的表达方式。
Exemplo: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient. I can easily check my list anytime, and unlike paper, it won't get damaged or lost.
× I nearly never made a decision because my MBTI is ENFP.
✓ I nearly never make a decision because my MBTI is ENFP.
这里描述的是一个习惯性的动作,应该使用一般现在时,而不是过去时。
× That means I usually make decision immediately.
✓ That means I usually make decisions immediately.
decision是可数名词,表示“决定”,这里指的是一般情况,应该用复数形式decisions。
× I'm emotionally owned and I always not make.
✓ I'm emotionally driven and I always don't make decisions in advance.
原句中'owned'用错,应该是'driven'表示被情感驱使;'I always not make'语序错误,否定词应放在助动词后面,且缺少宾语。
× I always don't make a decision in advance.
✓ I always don't make decisions in advance.
decision应使用复数形式decisions,表示一般情况。
× For example, when an exam is near, I usually make a plan for.
✓ For example, when an exam is near, I usually make a plan.
短语'make a plan for'后面应接具体对象,单独使用'for'不完整,应去掉。
× Review my notes and completing my homework and so on.
✓ Review my notes, complete my homework, and so on.
并列动词应保持一致形式,前面是动词原形,后面应改为动词原形complete,而不是现在分词completing。
× That focus on their feelings and make a plan may cause a lot of other things.
✓ They focus on their feelings and making a plan may cause a lot of other things.
原句主语不明确,'That'应改为'they'指代人;'make a plan'应改为动名词'making a plan'作为主语。
× For example, we don't.
✓ For example, we don't do that.
句子不完整,缺少谓语部分,需补充完整表达。
× When you need to check your list, you just need to open your phone and you will know what will you do next.
✓ When you need to check your list, you just need to open your phone and you will know what you will do next.
间接疑问句中,语序应为陈述语序,不能倒装,'what will you do'应改为'what you will do'。
× But if you use a paper, it will easy to be broken.
✓ But if you use paper, it will be easy to be broken.
'paper'作为不可数名词不加冠词;'will easy'缺少系动词be,应为'will be easy'。