Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, definitely I make a list while doing shopping because, uh, sometimes I forgot the things that are ancestry to, uh, to bought.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, of course. I make a list for a work because it's good for me. If I make a list, then I just remember the things which are necessary for me and I have to go through them. So I just I.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Well, it depends on them because some of the people are who who think that they can easily remember those things that so that they do not have to make a list for for the things.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Well I prefer to make a list on my phone in notes. I just write down my notes that what I have to buy because if I write on paper then sometimes I I just forget the paper by placing somewhere else.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence clarity. Use correct verb forms and vocabulary, for example, 'sometimes I forget the things that are necessary to buy.' Also, keep your answer concise and natural.
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because sometimes I forget important items if I don't write them down.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: Focus on completing your sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, 'I make a list for work because it helps me remember important tasks and ensures I complete them efficiently.'
Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for work because it helps me remember important tasks and ensures I complete them efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use clearer expressions and linking words. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can easily remember everything without writing it down.'
Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can easily remember everything without writing it down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because I often lose paper lists when I misplace them.'
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I often lose paper lists when I misplace them.
× Yes, definitely I make a list while doing shopping because, uh, sometimes I forgot the things that are ancestry to, uh, to bought.
✓ Yes, definitely I make a list while shopping because, uh, sometimes I forget the things that I need to buy.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'forgot' (past tense) when the present tense 'forget' is appropriate to describe a habitual action. Also, 'to bought' is incorrect; the base form 'to buy' should be used after 'to'. Additionally, 'ancestry to' is incorrect and replaced with 'need to' for clarity.
× Yes, of course. I make a list for a work because it's good for me.
✓ Yes, of course. I make a list for work because it's good for me.
The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the uncountable noun 'work'. In English, 'work' as an uncountable noun does not require an article.
× If I make a list, then I just remember the things which are necessary for me and I have to go through them. So I just I.
✓ If I make a list, then I just remember the things which are necessary for me and I have to go through them.
The phrase 'So I just I.' is incomplete and does not form a proper sentence. It should be removed to maintain sentence clarity and correctness.
× Well, it depends on them because some of the people are who who think that they can easily remember those things that so that they do not have to make a list for for the things.
✓ Well, it depends on them because some people think that they can easily remember those things so they do not have to make a list for them.
The original sentence has redundant words ('are who who') and awkward phrasing. 'Some of the people' is better as 'some people'. The phrase 'that so that' is incorrect; 'so' alone suffices. Also, 'for for the things' is redundant; 'for them' is clearer and grammatically correct.
× Well I prefer to make a list on my phone in notes.
✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone in Notes.
The phrase 'in notes' is unclear. Capitalizing 'Notes' indicates the specific app used for note-taking, which is the correct prepositional phrase here.
× I just write down my notes that what I have to buy because if I write on paper then sometimes I I just forget the paper by placing somewhere else.
✓ I just write down my notes about what I have to buy because if I write on paper, then sometimes I just forget the paper by placing it somewhere else.
The phrase 'that what I have to buy' is incorrect; 'about what I have to buy' is correct. Also, 'by placing somewhere else' lacks the object 'it' and should be 'by placing it somewhere else'. The repeated 'I' is a mistake and removed.