List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and has minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words like 'I' and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember the items I need. Since I tend to forget things easily, the list ensures I don't miss anything important. Therefore, making a list is essential for me whenever I go shopping.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and has some grammatical mistakes, such as 'tax' instead of 'task'. Try to organize your ideas better and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me track the status of my tasks, including what is ongoing and what I have completed. For example, I use the Kanban dashboard method to organize and prioritize my work effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'tax' instead of 'task'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'moreover' correctly and try to be more specific in your explanation.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they feel confused about which tasks to prioritize. Moreover, seeing many tasks in progress can overwhelm them, making it harder to focus.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting minor grammatical errors and making sentences more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easier than using paper. Additionally, I can upload the list to the cloud and access it anytime and anywhere, which is very convenient.

× Yes, I prepare a list before shopping because it will really help me to remind the things that I I would have to shop and being a forgetful person, making a list will help me to not miss out an item.

✓ Yes, I prepare a list before shopping because it will really help me to remember the things that I have to shop for and, being a forgetful person, making a list will help me not to miss out on any item.

The phrase 'help me to remind the things' is incorrect; 'help me to remember the things' is correct because 'remind' requires an object who is reminded. Also, 'being a forgetful person' is a participial phrase correctly used here. 'Help me to not miss out an item' should be 'help me not to miss out on any item' because 'miss out' is followed by 'on' and 'any' is more appropriate than 'an' in this context.

× I think some people do not like making the list before shopping or doing work because they will make them feel confused on which tax they should focus more and which they should give less effort.

✓ I think some people do not like making lists before shopping or doing work because it makes them feel confused about which task they should focus on more and which they should give less effort to.

The word 'the list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to lists in general. 'Tax' is incorrect; the correct word is 'task'. Also, 'make them feel confused' should be 'makes them feel confused' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (making lists). The preposition 'on' is needed after 'focus', and 'give less effort' should be 'give less effort to'.

× Moreover, they are also overwhelmed by seeing the task that are in progress and needed to be done.

✓ Moreover, they are also overwhelmed by seeing the tasks that are in progress and need to be done.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'are'. Also, 'needed to be done' should be 'need to be done' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I mostly prepare a list on my phone because it is much easier than to prepare it on paper and we can also upload the items of the list to the cloud and access it from whenever we like, wherever we like.

✓ I mostly prepare a list on my phone because it is much easier than preparing it on paper, and we can also upload the items on the list to the cloud and access them whenever and wherever we like.

The phrase 'than to prepare it' should be 'than preparing it' for correct comparison. 'Items of the list' should be 'items on the list'. 'Access it from whenever we like' is incorrect; it should be 'access them whenever and wherever we like' to correctly refer to 'items' and remove unnecessary preposition 'from'.

× So I think I would prefer to make list on my phone rather than on paper.

✓ So I think I would prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper.

The phrase 'make list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list' because 'list' is a singular countable noun.