List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I can keep in mind' and 'it will not divert my mind', you could combine these ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I prefer making a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from buying things outside my budget.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but it could be improved by avoiding filler phrases like 'Well' and 'That's it'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and vary your vocabulary a bit more.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a to-do list in the morning to organize my tasks, which helps me stay focused and complete everything efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words. Also, provide a more specific reason and use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Some people avoid making lists because they believe it adds extra work and prefer to keep things flexible instead.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but a bit wordy and repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me and more convenient than paper and pen.

× Yes, I do prefer making a list of items I need to buy whenever I go for shopping because in this way I can keep in mind the things that I need to buy and also it will not divert my mind in in buying other things out of my budget.

✓ Yes, I do prefer to make a list of items I need to buy whenever I go shopping because in this way I can keep in mind the things that I need to buy and also it will not divert my mind from buying other things out of my budget.

The verb 'prefer' is usually followed by the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the gerund 'making'. Also, the phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Additionally, the preposition 'in' before 'buying' is incorrect; it should be 'from buying' to indicate prevention or avoidance.

× Generally, when I wake up in the morning, I usually prepare A to do list of the task that I need to complete during the day.

✓ Generally, when I wake up in the morning, I usually prepare a to-do list of the tasks that I need to complete during the day.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and the phrase 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'the task' should be plural 'the tasks' because it refers to multiple tasks.

× I think some people don't prefer making a list because that they think that making a list would add additional additional workload on them and they do not try for making a list.

✓ I think some people don't prefer making a list because they think that making a list would add additional workload on them and they do not try to make a list.

The conjunction 'because that' is incorrect; it should be just 'because'. The word 'additional' is repeated unnecessarily. The phrase 'try for making a list' is incorrect; it should be 'try to make a list'.

× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because in this modern era everybody has an easy access to the mobile phone rather than paper or pen because our phone is available 24 by 7, so I think in our pockets.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because in this modern era everybody has easy access to a mobile phone rather than paper or pen because our phones are available 24/7, so I think they are always in our pockets.

The phrase 'an easy access' is incorrect; 'access' is uncountable and should be used without 'an'. 'The mobile phone' should be 'a mobile phone' to generalize. 'Our phone is available' should be plural 'our phones are available' to match the plural subject. '24 by 7' is better expressed as '24/7'. The last phrase 'I think in our pockets' is incomplete and should be 'I think they are always in our pockets' to clarify the subject.