List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many repetitions and incomplete sentences. Try to give a clear and direct response with a topic sentence, followed by supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and natural.

Exemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to explore the mall and discover new items spontaneously. This way, I can find interesting things without being restricted by a list.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague expressions.

Exemplo: I am not currently working, so I don't make lists for work. However, in the future, I might make lists to stay organized and ensure I bring everything I need at once.

Sugestão: Your answer has unclear phrases and repeated words. Try to express your opinion clearly with a topic sentence and supporting reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom. They prefer to be spontaneous, which makes them feel more comfortable and relaxed.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains repetitions and incomplete sentences. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, making the list easily accessible. In contrast, paper lists can be forgotten at home, so using a phone is more convenient.

× I don't make less than when I do shop because I prefer going to.

✓ I don't make lists when I do shop because I prefer going to.

The word 'less' is incorrectly used here; the correct plural form 'lists' should be used to match the context of making multiple items on a list.

× I don't less.

✓ I don't make lists.

The phrase 'I don't less' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'I don't make lists' to correctly express the idea of not making shopping lists.

× I could do less for my work because like I'll keep in mind that I need to bring them all in one time so I need to be responsible for this.

✓ I could make lists for my work because I'll keep in mind that I need to bring them all at one time, so I need to be responsible for this.

The word 'less' is incorrectly used instead of 'lists'. Also, 'in one time' should be 'at one time' to correctly express the timing.

× I feel or I believe that making less will make you stuck in a plan which some people hate.

✓ I feel or I believe that making lists will make you stuck in a plan which some people hate.

The word 'less' is incorrectly used instead of 'lists' to refer to making lists.

× I and I do also believe that some people like being free and which will make them, which will make them feel like they're OK.

✓ I also believe that some people like being free, which makes them feel like they're OK.

The conjunction 'and which' is incorrectly used; it should be simplified to 'which' to correctly connect the clauses.

× I actually prefer it on phone because I do believe in these days people hold the phone 24/7 so it's easily it's easily accessible.

✓ I actually prefer it on the phone because I believe these days people hold their phones 24/7, so it's easily accessible.

The phrase 'on phone' should be 'on the phone' to correctly use the definite article with singular countable nouns. Also, 'people hold the phone' should be 'people hold their phones' to correctly use possessive pronouns and plural form.

× However, papers like we don't usually hold paper with us or sometimes we we write the list on papers but we forgot it.

✓ However, with papers, we don't usually carry them with us, or sometimes we write the list on paper but forget it.

The pronoun usage is incorrect; 'we don't usually hold paper' should be 'we don't usually carry them' to correctly refer to papers. Also, 'we forgot it' should be 'we forget it' to maintain present tense consistency.