List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use more natural phrasing and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need. For example, I usually write the list on paper or in a notebook, so I don't forget anything when I go shopping.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I already know the tasks I need to complete each day. Therefore, I find it unnecessary to write them down.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and detailed. Avoid vague phrases like 'memory issue' and provide clearer reasons with linking words.

Exemplo: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory. For instance, they might find it easier to remember tasks without writing them down.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words and improve sentence clarity.

Exemplo: I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because I can easily access them anytime. Sometimes, when I use paper lists, I forget to bring them with me, which is inconvenient.

× I already written in the book or a paper.

✓ I have already written it in the book or on a paper.

The sentence requires the present perfect tense to indicate a completed action relevant to the present. 'Written' is the past participle and needs an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'in a paper' should be 'on a paper' because we say 'on paper' for writing surfaces.

× I already written in the book or a paper.

✓ I have already written it in the book or on a paper.

The preposition 'in' is correct for 'book' but for 'paper' the correct preposition is 'on'. We say 'on paper' when referring to writing surfaces.

× it makes me easy to buy the things which I want

✓ it makes it easy for me to buy the things that I want

The phrase 'makes me easy' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'makes it easy for me'. Also, 'which' is better replaced by 'that' in restrictive clauses.

× the things which I want

✓ the things that I want

No plural issue here, but 'which' is better replaced by 'that' in restrictive clauses for clarity.

× I already written in the book or a paper.

✓ I have already written it in the book or on a paper.

The verb 'written' is a past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense.

× I will never forget the item which I want to buy.

✓ I will never forget the item that I want to buy.

In restrictive clauses, 'that' is preferred over 'which' for clarity.

× No, I did not make a list for my work because when I go for work I already know the what kinds of work I want I have to do.

✓ No, I do not make a list for my work because when I go to work I already know what kinds of work I have to do.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. Since the question is general, present tense is appropriate. Also, 'go for work' should be 'go to work'. The phrase 'the what kinds of work I want I have to do' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'what kinds of work I have to do'.

× when I go for work

✓ when I go to work

The correct preposition with 'go' and 'work' is 'to', not 'for'.

× So that's why I never I never make a list of what.

✓ So that's why I never make a list of what I have to do.

The sentence is incomplete and has repetition. It needs to be completed with the object of the list and remove repeated words.

× people don't like to make list

✓ people don't like to make lists

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making lists.

× They have memorized the things which they have to buy.

✓ They have memorized the things that they have to buy.

In restrictive clauses, 'that' is preferred over 'which'.

× I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because in my because when I buy, when I whenever I want to see, I open my phone gallery and make it clear.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because whenever I want to see it, I open my phone and make it clear.

The phrase 'in my because when I buy' is ungrammatical and removed. 'Phone gallery' is not the correct place for lists; simply 'my phone' is better. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Sometimes when I retain the list on paper, I forgot the list of paper in my house so.

✓ Sometimes when I keep the list on paper, I forget the list at home.

'Retain' is not commonly used for keeping lists; 'keep' is better. The verb tense should be present tense 'forget' to match the habitual action. 'In my house' is better as 'at home'. The sentence is completed properly.