Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Well, it depends on situations. If I have enough time I will make a list. However, most of the situations I don't. I don't make a list, I just.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I often make a list for my work and it does work really well. You know, it makes me doing things. It makes me do things.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Well, for some people, they may think it's really restrict their freedom. If they make a list, they must do, they must do it.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer make a list on my phone. Well you know, mobile phone has become common these days, so it's really convenient to make lists on phone and as I finish one thing I could check it.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答时语言不够自然,表达不完整且有重复,建议简洁明了地直接回答问题,并避免重复。可以适当补充具体情况使内容更丰富。
Exemplo: I usually make a list when I have enough time because it helps me remember what to buy. However, if I'm in a hurry, I just shop without a list.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题,建议使用正确的时态和表达方式,同时可以具体说明清单如何帮助工作。
Exemplo: Yes, I often make a list for my work, and it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不流畅,建议使用完整句子并避免重复,同时可以举例说明原因。
Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom and they have to follow the list strictly.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答较为自然,但有语法错误和表达不够准确,建议注意动词形式和句子结构,同时可以补充更多具体优点。
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily check off tasks as I complete them.
× Well, it depends on situations.
✓ Well, it depends on the situation.
这里的'situations'应使用单数形式'situation',因为表达的是一般情况,通常用单数形式。
× However, most of the situations I don't.
✓ However, in most situations I don't.
'most of the situations'应改为'in most situations',且去掉定冠词'the',使表达更自然。
× I don't make a list, I just.
✓ I don't make a list, I just don't.
句子不完整,缺少谓语动词,需补充完整表达。
× If I have enough time I will make a list.
✓ If I have enough time, I will make a list.
缺少逗号,虽然不是语法错误,但加上逗号更符合英语书写规范。
× You know, it makes me doing things.
✓ You know, it makes me do things.
动词make后接动词原形,不用-ing形式。
× Well, for some people, they may think it's really restrict their freedom.
✓ Well, for some people, they may think it really restricts their freedom.
主语是it,谓语动词restrict应加第三人称单数-s。
× If they make a list, they must do, they must do it.
✓ If they make a list, they must do it.
重复表达,应删去多余部分。
× I prefer make a list on my phone.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.
动词prefer后应接不定式to make,而不是直接接动词原形。
× mobile phone has become common these days, so it's really convenient to make lists on phone and as I finish one thing I could check it.
✓ Mobile phones have become common these days, so it's really convenient to make lists on the phone, and as I finish one thing I can check it.
'mobile phone'应用复数形式'mobile phones',谓语动词相应用复数'have';'on phone'应加定冠词'the phone';'could'改为'can'更符合现在时态。