Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I always list when I shop because when I list shop I will convenient to buy some I want thing.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I list for my work it is good effect because if I don't lift I maybe don't do something finish if I have list I can do.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
The don't Some people like making lists because they have a good memory, they they have a talent, they bring is smart and in the brain has a list.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I think list on paper is good. I always list on paper because the paper I can. I can look and in the phone I don't look.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然,且缺少连贯的连接词。建议加强语法基础,使用完整句子,并用连接词使表达更流畅。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me buy the things I need more conveniently.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: 回答语法混乱,表达不清晰,缺少逻辑连接词。建议练习使用简单句和连接词,明确表达因果关系。
Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work. It works well because without a list, I might forget to finish some tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误,表达不自然。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并用更准确的词汇表达观点。
Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember things easily.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子,清楚说明理由,并使用连接词。
Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper because I can easily see them, while I often forget to check lists on my phone.
× Yes, I always list when I shop because when I list shop I will convenient to buy some I want thing.
✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop because when I make a list, shopping is convenient to buy some things I want.
这里“list”应使用复数形式“lists”或短语“make a list”,且“thing”应为复数“things”,因为指多个物品。
× Yes, I always list when I shop because when I list shop I will convenient to buy some I want thing.
✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop because when I make a list, shopping is convenient to buy some things I want.
句中缺少冠词“a”,应为“make a list”,表示制作一个清单。
× Yes, I list for my work it is good effect because if I don't lift I maybe don't do something finish if I have list I can do.
✓ Yes, I make a list for my work. It has a good effect because if I don't make a list, I may not finish something. If I have a list, I can do it.
句子结构混乱,缺少连接词和正确的动词形式,需拆分成多个句子并调整语序。
× Yes, I list for my work it is good effect because if I don't lift I maybe don't do something finish if I have list I can do.
✓ Yes, I make a list for my work. It has a good effect because if I don't make a list, I may not finish something. If I have a list, I can do it.
“list”前应加冠词“a”,表示一个具体的清单。
× The don't Some people like making lists because they have a good memory, they they have a talent, they bring is smart and in the brain has a list.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory, they have a talent, they are smart, and their brain already has a list.
句中“The don't Some people”顺序错误,应为“Some people don't”。另外,“they bring is smart”表达不正确,应为“they are smart”。
× The don't Some people like making lists because they have a good memory, they they have a talent, they bring is smart and in the brain has a list.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory, they have a talent, they are smart, and their brain already has a list.
句子结构混乱,重复词语且表达不清晰,需调整语序和用词。
× I think list on paper is good. I always list on paper because the paper I can. I can look and in the phone I don't look.
✓ I think making a list on paper is good. I always make a list on paper because I can look at the paper, but I don't look at my phone.
“list”前应加冠词“a”,且“look”后应加介词“at”,表示查看。