List— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Uh, well, definitely because umm, I am a stable person, so I make a list to make sure that I buy all of what I want, what I want to buy, and what I need to buy.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Sometimes, sometimes I make a list to make sure that I implement all of them, but I think it's not effective because I'm sometimes a month to mall. I do multitask so that's a problem that I have been doing.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think that I think, uh, there are many reasons, but for me the first one is, uh, that is, uh, like, umm, it waste time. And second reason is, and there is the second reason is that they fight it not effective for them and sometimes they delay finishing their work.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer make lists on my phone because I think it's a helpful and easy to add, effortless to make them and so I can take it immediately on my phone whenever I need to do something that necessary for me.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp lại và có nhiều từ ngữ không cần thiết như "umm" và "what I want to buy" lặp lại. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and avoid forgetting important items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để truyền đạt ý tốt hơn.
Exemplo: Sometimes I make a list for work to keep track of tasks, but it is not always effective because I tend to multitask and get distracted.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: Bạn sử dụng nhiều từ ngữ thừa và lặp lại, câu trả lời thiếu mạch lạc. Hãy tránh các từ ngữ như "uh", "umm" và sắp xếp ý tưởng rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời logic hơn.
Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they think it wastes time and feels ineffective, which can sometimes cause delays in completing tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và câu hơi dài. Bạn nên chia câu rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to add items anytime. I can access my list immediately whenever I need it.
Gramática
× I make a list to make sure that I buy all of what I want, what I want to buy, and what I need to buy.
✓ I make a list to make sure that I buy everything I want and need.
The phrase 'all of what I want' is awkward and incorrect in terms of singular and plural usage. 'Everything' is a better quantifier here to cover all items wanted and needed, improving clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Sometimes, sometimes I make a list to make sure that I implement all of them, but I think it's not effective because I'm sometimes a month to mall.
✓ Sometimes, I make a list to make sure that I complete all of them, but I think it's not effective because sometimes I go to the mall.
The phrase 'implement all of them' is incorrect; 'complete all of them' fits better for tasks or lists. Also, 'I'm sometimes a month to mall' is incorrect preposition and structure; it should be 'sometimes I go to the mall' to express the intended meaning.
× I do multitask so that's a problem that I have been doing.
✓ I multitask, so that's a problem I have been having.
The conjunction 'so' is used correctly, but the sentence structure is awkward. 'I do multitask' is better as 'I multitask', and 'problem that I have been doing' is incorrect; it should be 'problem I have been having' to express ongoing issues.
× it waste time.
✓ it wastes time.
The verb 'waste' needs to agree with the singular subject 'it', so it should be 'wastes'. This is also a subject-verb agreement issue (ID 27), but primarily the verb form is incorrect here.
× it waste time.
✓ it wastes time.
The subject 'it' is third person singular, so the verb must be in the third person singular form 'wastes'. This is a common subject-verb agreement error.
× And second reason is, and there is the second reason is that they fight it not effective for them and sometimes they delay finishing their work.
✓ The second reason is that they find it not effective for them, and sometimes they delay finishing their work.
The sentence has redundant conjunctions and awkward phrasing. 'They fight it' is incorrect; it should be 'they find it'. Also, 'and there is the second reason is' is redundant. Simplifying improves clarity and correctness.
× I prefer make lists on my phone because I think it's a helpful and easy to add, effortless to make them and so I can take it immediately on my phone whenever I need to do something that necessary for me.
✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because I think it's helpful and easy to add items; it's effortless to make them, and I can access them immediately whenever I need to do something necessary for me.
The phrase 'prefer make lists' is missing 'to' after 'prefer'. Also, 'take it immediately on my phone' is incorrect; 'access them immediately' is better. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.
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