List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不够自然，比如“Every time I just go supermarket or the shop randomly”不太通顺。建议你使用更自然的表达方式，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

Exemplo: I rarely make shopping lists. Usually, I just go to the supermarket randomly. However, if I need to buy essential items and have limited storage at home, I will prepare a list beforehand.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“do it follow my heart”和“make me out of math”不符合英语习惯。建议你使用正确的时态和表达方式，清楚地说明你的观点。

Exemplo: When I was younger, I didn't make lists for my tasks and just followed my feelings. But now, for important tasks and exams, I make lists before studying, which helps me stay organized and focused.

Sugestão: 这句话语法和表达有较大问题，如“it's a of mass”和“they self can stay organised”不正确。建议你简洁明了地表达观点，使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it is unnecessary. They believe they can stay organized without writing things down, so making lists seems like a waste of time to them.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“so it is more”没有完整表达意思。建议你注意句子完整性，使用连贯的表达。

Exemplo: I usually prefer making lists on my phone because it is more flexible and convenient. I can easily change my plans anytime, and sometimes it's hard to find paper.

× I seldom make lists when I go shopping.

✓ I seldom make a list when I go shopping.

这里的'seldom make lists'应改为'seldom make a list'，因为通常说购物时做一张购物清单，使用单数更合适。

× Every time I just go supermarket or the shop randomly.

✓ Every time I just go to the supermarket or the shop randomly.

动词go后面需要加介词to，表示去某个地方。

× But in some case I will make a list before I go shopping when there is something essential and but lack of storage in my home.

✓ But in some cases I will make a list before I go shopping when there is something essential and I lack storage in my home.

'some case'应为复数'some cases'，表示某些情况；另外，句中缺少主语'I'，应补充。

× In the past when I was small, I don't make lists for my work on tasks, I just do it follow my heart.

✓ In the past when I was small, I didn't make lists for my work or tasks, I just did it following my heart.

描述过去的动作，助动词和动词应使用过去式；'don't make'应改为'didn't make'，'do'改为'did'，'follow'改为'following'。

× But currently when I face an important task and exams I will make a list before I start studying and I find it really helpful because it can make me out of math.

✓ But currently when I face an important task and exams, I will make a list before I start studying and I find it really helpful because it can help me with math.

'make me out of math'表达不正确，应改为'help me with math'，表示帮助我学数学。

× For some people making lists may make them feel it's a of mass since they think they self can stay organised without a list, so making a list is an effortless thing for them.

✓ For some people, making lists may make them feel it's a waste of time since they think they themselves can stay organised without a list, so making a list is an unnecessary thing for them.

'it's a of mass'表达错误，应为'waste of time'；'they self'应为'they themselves'，反身代词使用错误。

× Usually I tend to make a list on my phone rather than on paper, since using phone is more flexible and convenient and I can change the plan as fast as I want, but it's hard to find paper sometimes so it is more.

✓ Usually I tend to make a list on my phone rather than on paper, since using a phone is more flexible and convenient and I can change the plan as fast as I want, but it's hard to find paper sometimes so using a phone is better.

'using phone'缺少冠词，应为'using a phone'；句尾表达不完整，补充完整表达。