Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I usually make a shop before I go shopping. Make a list can help me not forget to not forget to. Shopping something.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I always make a list when I work because it helps me organize my texts clearly. Clearly. For example, by writing down what I need to do, I can keep track of my progress and avoid forgetting.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Because make a list need spend more time and we may go to bed. Go to bed so late and we are so tired.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on paper because I think make make a list on paper is good for me. I can see it clearly and I think it is very helpful to me.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议加强句子结构的练习,避免重复和不完整的句子。可以尝试用完整的句子表达观点,并且注意时态和词汇的准确使用。
Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答较为完整,但存在重复和表达不够流畅的问题。建议使用更多连接词使句子更连贯,同时避免重复词汇。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks clearly. For example, by writing down what I need to do, I can track my progress and avoid forgetting important duties.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 回答语法错误较多,表达不完整。建议学习如何用完整句子表达原因,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because it takes extra time, and they might end up going to bed late, which makes them feel tired.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答中有重复词汇,表达不够自然。建议练习用多样的词汇表达相同的意思,并且避免重复。
Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper because I find it easier to see and organize my tasks clearly, which helps me stay focused.
× Yes, I usually make a shop before I go shopping.
✓ Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go shopping.
原句中“make a shop”结构不正确,shop是名词或动词,不能用作“制作”的宾语。应使用“make a shopping list”表示“做购物清单”。这是句子结构错误。
× Make a list can help me not forget to not forget to. Shopping something.
✓ Making a list can help me not forget to buy something.
原句结构混乱,重复“not forget to”,且“Shopping something”不符合语法。应使用动名词短语“Making a list”作主语,后接完整的动词短语。
× Because make a list need spend more time and we may go to bed.
✓ Because making a list needs more time and we may go to bed late.
“make a list”应改为动名词“making a list”作主语;“need spend”缺少介词,应为“needs more time”;句子不完整,缺少“late”修饰“go to bed”。
× Go to bed so late and we are so tired.
✓ We go to bed so late and we are so tired.
句子缺少主语,应补充“we”使句子完整。
× I prefer to make a list on paper because I think make make a list on paper is good for me.
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I think making a list on paper is good for me.
“make make a list”重复且结构错误,应改为动名词短语“making a list”作主语。