List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use proper sentence structure. For example, say "No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. Instead, I check what I need at home and buy those items."

Exemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. Instead, I check what I need at home and buy those items. This way, I make sure I only purchase what is necessary and avoid wasting money.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is a bit confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons, linking ideas logically. For example, "Yes, I make a list for my work, and it helps me stay organized and improve my productivity."

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it helps me stay organized and improve my productivity. By following the list, I can prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important duties.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with specific reasons and use linking words. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time or they think it's unnecessary. However, I believe making lists is very helpful."

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time or they think it's unnecessary. However, I believe making lists is very helpful because it helps organize thoughts and tasks efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but repetitive and slightly awkward. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words. For example, "I prefer to make lists on paper because I find it easier to mark and review items compared to using my phone."

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper because I find it easier to mark and review items compared to using my phone. Also, writing by hand helps me remember tasks better.

× Well, question, no, actually I'm not making this.

✓ Well, no, actually I don't make this.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the present continuous tense 'I'm not making' when referring to a habitual action. The present simple tense 'I don't make' is appropriate for habitual actions or general truths.

× I'm going to the shop, to the store or market and I'm searching whatever I need in my home, then I will buy it.

✓ I go to the shop, the store, or the market and look for whatever I need at home, then I buy it.

The original sentence incorrectly uses present continuous tense 'I'm going' and 'I'm searching' for habitual actions. Present simple tense is appropriate for habitual actions. Also, 'searching whatever I need in my home' is awkward; 'look for whatever I need at home' is clearer.

× For my working time I'm making list and I'm following that.

✓ During my working time, I make a list and follow it.

The present continuous tense 'I'm making' and 'I'm following' is incorrectly used for habitual actions. Present simple tense 'I make' and 'I follow' is appropriate. Also, 'making list' should be 'make a list'.

× Those are still which I am mentioning my list and I think it will help to improve my job or my business and it's helped to make a better thinking for myself.

✓ These are still the items I mention in my list, and I think it helps improve my job or business and helps me think better.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use ('Those are still which I am mentioning my list') and awkward phrasing. 'These' is more appropriate for items being referred to. Also, 'it's helped to make a better thinking for myself' is incorrect; 'helps me think better' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I think it's because of some problem which people face them.

✓ I think it's because of some problems that people face.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the pronoun 'them' after 'which people face'. The relative clause should not include 'them'. Also, 'problem' should be plural 'problems' to match context.

× It's like lacking of time or they're thinking this type of job like making list is actually not necessary thing for them.

✓ It's like lacking time or they think that this type of job, like making a list, is actually not necessary for them.

The phrase 'lacking of time' is incorrect; it should be 'lacking time'. Also, 'they're thinking' is better as 'they think' for habitual thoughts. 'Making list' should be 'making a list'. 'Not necessary thing' should be 'not necessary'.

× But I think it will very good to make them seriously.

✓ But I think it would be very good for them to take it seriously.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun use and awkward phrasing. 'Make them seriously' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'for them to take it seriously'. Also, 'will very good' is ungrammatical; 'would be very good' is correct.

× I'm an older school guy. Older school guy.

✓ I'm an old-school guy. Old-school guy.

The phrase 'older school' is incorrect. The correct adjective is 'old-school' to describe someone who prefers traditional methods.

× That's why I think I prefer to make a list on paper and I find those when I mark something on on paper I can find it easily than the phone.

✓ That's why I think I prefer to make a list on paper, and when I mark something on paper, I can find it more easily than on the phone.

The original sentence has redundant prepositions ('on on paper') and awkward phrasing. 'Find those' is unclear; better to say 'when I mark something on paper, I can find it more easily than on the phone.' Also, comparative adverb 'more easily' is needed.