List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but needs to be more natural and clear. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of "I always use to see list because it makes me easier what I will buy," say "I always check my list because it helps me remember what to buy."

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I need to buy many items. This helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from forgetting anything. Also, it makes shopping quicker and more organized.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, explain how making a list helps you manage your work schedule.

Exemplo: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. By doing this, I can follow the same timetable every day and complete my work efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid unnecessary phrases. Provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists, and use linking words to connect your points.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming. Additionally, they may prefer to rely on memory or feel that lists limit their flexibility.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural. Use linking words to explain your preference and give reasons. For example, explain why using a phone is more convenient.

Exemplo: I sometimes make lists on paper, but I prefer using my phone because I always have it with me. This makes it easy to update my list anytime and anywhere.

× Yes, if I have to buy more products from the shop I'll sure make the list of what I sold out and I always use to see list because it makes me easier what I will buy and I don't forget it.

✓ Yes, if I have to buy more products from the shop, I'll surely make a list of what I sold out, and I always use to see the list because it makes it easier for me to know what I will buy and I don't forget it.

The sentence has issues with singular and plural forms such as 'the list' and 'see list'. Also, 'I'll sure make' should be 'I'll surely make' to use the correct adverb form. 'Makes me easier' is incorrect; it should be 'makes it easier for me'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, if I have to buy more products from the shop I'll sure make the list of what I sold out and I always use to see list because it makes me easier what I will buy and I don't forget it.

✓ Yes, if I have to buy more products from the shop, I'll surely make a list of what I sold out, and I always use to see the list because it makes it easier for me to know what I will buy and I don't forget it.

The definite article 'the' is missing before 'list' in 'see list'. Also, 'the list' is more appropriate when referring to a specific list. Adding 'the' clarifies the meaning and is grammatically correct.

× Yes, if I have to buy more products from the shop I'll sure make the list of what I sold out and I always use to see list because it makes me easier what I will buy and I don't forget it.

✓ Yes, if I have to buy more products from the shop, I'll surely make a list of what I sold out, and I always use to see the list because it makes it easier for me to know what I will buy and I don't forget it.

'I'll sure make' is incorrect; the correct modal verb phrase is 'I'll surely make'. 'Surely' is an adverb modifying the verb 'make' and is the proper form here.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work I I find it easier to make sure that my timetable will be same as everyday and it will.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work. I find it easier to make sure that my timetable is the same as every day, and it is.

The sentence has tense and structure issues. 'Will be same as everyday' should be 'is the same as every day' to use present tense for habitual actions. Also, 'everyday' as one word is an adjective meaning common; 'every day' as two words means each day, which is correct here.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work I I find it easier to make sure that my timetable will be same as everyday and it will.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work. I find it easier to make sure that my timetable is the same as every day, and it is.

The original sentence is a run-on with repeated 'I' and missing punctuation. Splitting into two sentences and correcting the tense improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Uh, people who don't like making list, they are unable to make a list by their unwanted interest in anything.

✓ Uh, people who don't like making lists are unable to make a list because of their lack of interest in anything.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' to match plural form with 'people'. Also, 'by their unwanted interest' is incorrect; 'because of their lack of interest' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Uh, people who don't like making list, they are unable to make a list by their unwanted interest in anything. And what can they do? And they will also say, I can do without making list. That's it.

✓ Uh, people who don't like making lists are unable to make a list because of their lack of interest in anything. What can they do? They also say, 'I can do without making a list.' That's it.

The use of 'And' at the beginning of sentences is unnecessary and disrupts flow. Removing 'And' and restructuring sentences improves coherence. Also, 'making list' should be 'making a list'.

× I sometimes make list on paper and sometimes on phone but I really prefer using my phone because it always with me.

✓ I sometimes make lists on paper and sometimes on my phone, but I really prefer using my phone because it is always with me.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' to agree with plural usage. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on my phone' for clarity. 'It always with me' is missing the verb 'is'.

× Whenever I go anywhere I always took my phone with me which will be easily assist and update list with which makes.

✓ Whenever I go anywhere, I always take my phone with me, which easily assists and updates my list.

'Took' is past tense; 'take' is correct for habitual action. The phrase 'which will be easily assist and update list with which makes' is ungrammatical and unclear. Corrected to 'which easily assists and updates my list' for clarity and correct preposition use.