List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat natural but incomplete and lacks clarity at the end. Try to finish your thoughts fully and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about how the app helps you.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I shop, whether for groceries or clothes. Additionally, I use a popular price-matching app called Flip Up, which allows me to compare prices from different stores easily. This helps me save money and make informed decisions.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and structured. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary to express productivity and organization.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list of tasks for work every evening because it helps me organize my priorities for the next day. As a result, I stay focused and become more productive throughout the day.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Avoid vague phrases like 'I would like to say' and 'so yeah, I think like'. Instead, give a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or feel lazy. Consequently, they shop randomly, which can lead to overbuying unnecessary items due to lack of planning.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally good but incomplete at the end and has minor grammar issues. Try to finish your sentences fully and use linking words like 'however' to contrast your preferences. Also, avoid minor errors like 'if I have times' (should be 'if I have time').

Exemplo: I prefer both methods. If I have time, I use my notepad or sticky notes to write a list. However, when I'm in a hurry or commuting, I find it convenient to make a list on my phone.

× Yes, every time I go for my grocery shopping or even the clothes, I usually carry a list of the items that I need to buy and I even look for price matching apps.

✓ Yes, every time I go grocery shopping or even buy clothes, I usually carry a list of the items that I need to buy and I even look for price matching apps.

The phrase 'go for my grocery shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go grocery shopping' without 'for'. Similarly, 'or even the clothes' is unclear and should be 'or even buy clothes' to clarify the action.

× There is one quite popular in my area, uh known as flip up.

✓ There is one quite popular in my area, known as Flip Up.

The phrase 'uh known as flip up' is an incomplete clause and includes a filler 'uh' which should be omitted. Also, 'Flip Up' should be capitalized as it is a proper noun.

× You can compare prices from different and you can even.

✓ You can compare prices from different stores, and you can even do more.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'different'. Adding 'stores' completes the meaning. The phrase 'and you can even' is incomplete and needs completion or removal.

× I like to make a list of tasks which I need to do for my work especially I do have a habit of making a list every evening after finishing my work which is for the next day.

✓ I like to make a list of tasks that I need to do for my work, especially since I have a habit of making a list every evening after finishing my work for the next day.

The phrase 'which I need to do for my work' is better expressed as 'that I need to do for my work'. Also, 'especially I do have a habit' is awkward; 'especially since I have a habit' is clearer. The clause 'which is for the next day' is better integrated as 'for the next day'.

× So it helped me organize and stay in place for my next day and make me more productive for my work.

✓ So it helps me organize and stay on track for my next day and makes me more productive at work.

The phrase 'stay in place' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'stay on track'. Also, 'make me more productive for my work' should be 'makes me more productive at work' to use the correct preposition and subject-verb agreement.

× Maybe some people don't like it making list and they just go random picking up stuff and maybe they overbuy some of the items which they might not need because of the list they have not prepared before.

✓ Maybe some people don't like making lists and they just pick items randomly, and maybe they overbuy some items they might not need because they haven't prepared a list before.

The phrase 'don't like it making list' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like making lists'. 'Go random picking up stuff' is awkward; 'pick items randomly' is clearer. Also, 'because of the list they have not prepared before' is better expressed as 'because they haven't prepared a list before'.

× Sometimes if I have times then I pick up my notepad or stickies to prepare the list and sometimes if I'm in a hurry to buy something or commuting from my work then while sitting on the train I prefer to make list on my phone.

✓ Sometimes if I have time, I pick up my notepad or stickies to prepare the list, and sometimes if I'm in a hurry to buy something or commuting from work, then while sitting on the train, I prefer to make the list on my phone.

The phrase 'if I have times' should be 'if I have time'. 'Commuting from my work' is better as 'commuting from work'. Also, 'make list on my phone' should be 'make the list on my phone' to include the definite article.

× I find it both ways. Conven.

✓ I find both ways convenient.

The phrase 'I find it both ways. Conven.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'I find both ways convenient' to express the idea clearly and grammatically.