List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and lacks linking words. Try to use complete sentences and connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the word 'list' unnecessarily.

Exemplo: Yes, I often make a list whenever I go shopping with my family because it helps me remember things easily.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer structure and better vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct grammar, such as 'I usually forget things'. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'keep things remain'.

Exemplo: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me stay organised. Since I usually forget things, making lists is very useful for me.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and avoid repeating words. Also, start with a topic sentence and then explain with supporting details using linking words.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they have sharp memories and rarely forget things. Moreover, they are very careful and punctual, so they don't feel the need to make lists.

Sugestão: Your answer has repetition and lacks fluency. Try to avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, use correct expressions like 'make a list' and 'on my mobile phone'.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because I can store many lists in one device. Therefore, it is very convenient to use my phone for this purpose.

× Yes, I often make list whenever I go for shopping with my family because list help me to remember things easily.

✓ Yes, I often make lists whenever I go shopping with my family because lists help me to remember things easily.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because the speaker refers to making more than one list. Also, 'help' should be 'help' to agree with the plural subject 'lists'. Additionally, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'.

× Yes, I often make list for my work because it helps me to keep things remain and I usually forgot things so that it is very useful for me.

✓ Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me to keep things organized and I usually forget things, so they are very useful for me.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context. 'It' should be changed to 'they' to agree with the plural 'lists'. 'Keep things remain' is incorrect; it should be 'keep things organized' or 'keep things in order'. 'Forgot' is past tense and should be 'forget' to match the present tense context.

× Yes, I often make list for my work because it helps me to keep things remain and I usually forgot things so that it is very useful for me.

✓ Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me to keep things organized and I usually forget things, so they are very useful for me.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'forget' because the speaker is talking about a habitual action.

× Because some people are usually very usually having very sharp memory and they can't forget things and they are very careful and very punctual.

✓ Because some people usually have a very sharp memory and they can't forget things, and they are very careful and very punctual.

The phrase 'are usually very usually having' is incorrect; it should be 'usually have'. 'Memory' is singular and correctly used with 'a' as 'a very sharp memory'.

× So that was the reason.

✓ So that is the reason.

The phrase 'So that was the reason' is past tense but the context is general, so present tense 'is' is appropriate. Also, 'So that' is better as 'That is the reason' or 'That is why' for clarity.

× Well, I prefer to make list on my mobile phone because I can I can make I can list several of things in one mobile phone.

✓ Well, I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because I can list several things on one mobile phone.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to indicate multiple lists. The phrase 'I can I can make I can list' is repetitive and should be simplified to 'I can list'. 'Several of things' should be 'several things'. Also, 'in one mobile phone' should be 'on one mobile phone'.