List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains many hesitations and repetitions which affect fluency and naturalness. Try to speak more smoothly and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect ideas clearly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I tend to forget things easily. I usually write down all the products I need on my phone's notes app, which makes shopping much easier and more organized.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and hesitations. Try to use past and present tenses correctly and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words like 'then' or 'after that' to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I keep a personal diary where I write down all my daily tasks every morning. This helps me stay organized, and after completing each task, I erase it from the list, which gives me a sense of accomplishment.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical mistakes and hesitations. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to explain reasons logically and provide specific details.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time, especially since it can take 10 to 15 minutes to prepare a list for the whole day. Also, some prefer to rely on memory rather than writing things down.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but has some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking words like 'because' to explain your preference more naturally. Also, keep your sentences concise and well-structured.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because I can carry it anywhere in my pocket and easily check my pending tasks throughout the day.

× So I make a list or I write down all the, all, the, all the all the products on my phone in the notes which which feels me, which give me very which which makes it very easy for me to to to collect all the stuffs.

✓ So I make a list or I write down all the products on my phone in the notes which makes it very easy for me to collect all the stuff.

The original sentence contains repeated words and incorrect verb forms such as 'feels me' and 'give me very' which are incorrect. The correct verb form here is 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to 'notes'. Also, 'stuffs' is incorrect; 'stuff' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Removing repetitions and correcting verb forms improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I had a personal diary in which when I wake up early in the morning, I, I wrote all my daily, all my, all my tasks which I had to perform the whole day.

✓ I have a personal diary in which, when I wake up early in the morning, I write down all my daily tasks that I have to perform throughout the day.

The original sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. Since the diary is presumably still in use, present tense 'have' and 'write' are appropriate. Also, 'which I had to perform the whole day' is awkward; 'that I have to perform throughout the day' is clearer and grammatically correct. Consistent tense usage is important for clarity.

× And after making that list, I, I, it really helped me.

✓ And after making that list, it really helps me.

The original sentence uses past tense 'helped' which conflicts with the ongoing habit implied by the context. Present tense 'helps' is more appropriate to indicate a habitual action.

× And I, when I was and I was done with the when I was done with the task, I, I just erased that, erase it from the.

✓ And when I am done with the task, I just erase it from the list.

The original sentence is confusing and mixes past and present tenses improperly. Using present tense 'am done' and 'erase' fits the habitual action context. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'from the list' clarifies the meaning.

× Oh, some people don't fond of making lists because I think that they they feel that it is a waste of time or because it takes about 10 to 15 minutes to make a list of all the day.

✓ Oh, some people aren't fond of making lists because I think they feel it is a waste of time or because it takes about 10 to 15 minutes to make a list for the whole day.

The phrase 'don't fond' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'aren't fond'. Also, 'make a list of all the day' is awkward; 'make a list for the whole day' is correct. Proper use of prepositions and verb forms is necessary for grammatical accuracy.

× And apart from that, it some people who are who.

✓ And apart from that, some people who are... (sentence incomplete, needs clarification).

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. It appears to be a fragment and does not form a complete thought. To correct, the speaker should complete the sentence with a clear subject and predicate.

× Definite definitely on my phone as I can carry my phone anywhere and in my pocket I can check my task that wherever the task I have pending and I have to perform the whole day.

✓ Definitely on my phone, as I can carry it anywhere in my pocket and check my tasks that are pending and need to be performed throughout the day.

The original sentence has redundancy ('Definite definitely') and awkward phrasing. 'Definite' is an adjective and 'definitely' is an adverb; only 'definitely' is appropriate here. Also, the sentence structure is confusing; rephrasing improves clarity. Modal verbs are not directly misused here, but the sentence benefits from clearer modal verb and auxiliary verb usage.