Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
No, I don't like to make a list when shopping. I just go to the supermarket and walk around. Light items remind me what I need. For example, when I see something that was running low on, I just pick it up and put it in the cart.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
I do make a list for my work because I think it can help me prioritize the important things and don't forget to finish it. It can improve my efficiency and save time.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Some people would like to rely on their memory to remind them. Maybe they think creating a list is time consuming.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and portable. I can check my list anytime and anywhere. Additionally, the app will send me reminders so I cannot forgot important things and let me stay organized.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答较自然,但表达略显重复且有语法错误,如“Light items remind me”应为“Light cues remind me”或更准确表达。建议避免重复表达,使用更准确的词汇,并简洁明了地回答问题。
Exemplo: No, I usually don't make a shopping list. Instead, I rely on visual cues in the supermarket; when I notice items running low at home, I pick them up directly to restock.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: 回答内容清晰,但句子结构稍显简单,且有语法错误,如“don't forget to finish it”应为“not forget to complete tasks”。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅,并丰富细节。
Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize important tasks and ensures I don't forget to complete them. This method improves my efficiency and saves time throughout the day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答较简单,缺少连接词和具体细节。建议使用连接词如“because”或“since”,并举例说明为什么有人觉得列清单费时。
Exemplo: Some people prefer to rely on their memory because they believe making lists is time-consuming and interrupts their workflow.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 85.0Sugestão: 回答内容丰富且结构较好,但有语法错误,如“cannot forgot”应为“cannot forget”。建议注意语法准确性,并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and portable. I can check my list anytime and anywhere, and the app sends me reminders, so I never forget important tasks and can stay organized.
× No, I don't like to make a list when shopping.
✓ No, I don't like making a list when shopping.
动词like后面接动名词(-ing形式)表示喜欢做某事,使用不定式to make在这里不符合习惯用法。
× For example, when I see something that was running low on, I just pick it up and put it in the cart.
✓ For example, when I see something that is running low, I just pick it up and put it in the cart.
短语running low后不需要介词on,且时态应与现在时态see保持一致,故用is running low。
× I do make a list for my work because I think it can help me prioritize the important things and don't forget to finish it.
✓ I do make a list for my work because I think it can help me prioritize the important things and not forget to finish them.
并列结构中主语应保持一致,前半句主语是I,后半句应使用不定式not forget,且things为复数,故用them代替it。
× Some people would like to rely on their memory to remind them.
✓ Some people would like to rely on their memory to remind them.
此句无语法错误,符合语法规则。
× Maybe they think creating a list is time consuming.
✓ Maybe they think creating a list is time-consuming.
time-consuming作为形容词修饰creating a list时,中间应加连字符。
× Additionally, the app will send me reminders so I cannot forgot important things and let me stay organized.
✓ Additionally, the app will send me reminders so I cannot forget important things and it helps me stay organized.
cannot后应接动词原形forget,forgot是过去式;且后半句缺少主语,应补充it helps。