List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. For example, use 'because' to explain why you make lists and 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list, especially when I need to buy many items because it helps me remember everything. Additionally, my mother often reminds me to buy certain things, so the list keeps me organised.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Begin with a direct response, then explain how making lists helps you, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid short, fragmented sentences and be more specific about how it helps.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me prioritise important tasks. This method works well as it keeps me organised and ensures I complete my work efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear opinion with reasons, using linking words like 'because' and 'however'. Also, avoid repetition and complete your thoughts fully.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they believe it is unnecessary and prefer to rely on their memory. However, it depends on personal preference, as others find lists very helpful for organisation.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Use full sentences and explain your preference clearly with reasons. Use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas and avoid unfinished thoughts.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, making it easy to check and update my list anytime. In contrast, paper lists can be easily lost or forgotten.

× For me, sometimes I make a list when I want to shop when there are many things to I want to buy because it's help me to remember the things that I want.

✓ For me, sometimes I make a list when I want to shop when there are many things I want to buy because it helps me to remember the things that I want.

The phrase 'it's help me' is incorrect because after 'it' (third person singular), the verb should be in the third person singular form 'helps'. Also, 'to I want to buy' is incorrect; 'to' should be removed to correct the sentence structure.

× Sometimes my mom tell me buy this item.

✓ Sometimes my mom tells me to buy this item.

The verb 'tell' must agree with the third person singular subject 'my mom', so it should be 'tells'. Also, 'buy this item' needs the infinitive marker 'to' to be grammatically correct.

× I usually make a list for my work. I wrote the things that I want to do at first, the important things and it's work.

✓ I usually make a list for my work. I write the things that I want to do first, the important things, and it works.

The verb 'wrote' is past tense but the context is habitual, so present tense 'write' is appropriate. Also, 'it's work' should be 'it works' to agree with the third person singular subject.

× It's helped me to do my work. Perfect.

✓ It helps me to do my work. Perfect.

'It's helped' is present perfect tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so simple present 'It helps' is more appropriate.

× I think some people think making lists it's not helpful or useful 'cause they think when they make a list and their mind it's better.

✓ I think some people think making lists is not helpful or useful because they think when they make a list their mind is better.

The phrase 'making lists it's not' should be 'making lists is not' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'cause' should be expanded to 'because' for formal correctness. The phrase 'and their mind it's better' is incorrect; 'and' should be removed and 'it's' changed to 'is'.

× But it depends on the person, some people prefer make a list and others.

✓ But it depends on the person; some people prefer making a list and others don't.

After 'prefer', the gerund form 'making' is required. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'don't' clarifies the contrast.

× For me, I prefer make list on my phone 'cause I carry my phone everywhere I go to so it's easy and I think the paper can you maybe can just.

✓ For me, I prefer making a list on my phone because I carry my phone everywhere I go, so it's easy, and I think paper maybe can just...

After 'prefer', the gerund 'making' is needed. The phrase 'go to' should be 'go'. The last part is incomplete and unclear but corrected as far as possible.