List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain reasons with linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy. Moreover, if I forget something, I can easily check the list to ensure I don't miss anything. So, making a list is very helpful for me.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Use clearer sentence structures and linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to organise your ideas. Avoid grammatical errors and be specific about how lists help you.

Exemplo: Yes, I also make lists for my work. For example, when I study, I list the tasks I have completed, such as listening exercises. This way, if I miss anything, I can easily review it. Therefore, lists are important for managing my work effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer has many hesitations and lacks clarity. Try to speak more fluently and organise your ideas logically using linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Also, avoid filler words and be more specific in your explanation.

Exemplo: I think some people avoid making lists because they feel confident that they will remember everything. For instance, they believe they won't forget items when shopping or tasks at work. So, their confidence makes them prefer not to use lists.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and has some repetition. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words like 'but' and 'because' to explain your preference logically.

Exemplo: I used to make lists on paper, but after buying a new phone, I prefer using it because it's more convenient. For example, I can easily check and update my shopping list anytime on my phone.

× Just when you shop.

✓ Only when I shop.

The phrase 'Just when you shop' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'Only when I shop' to correctly express the intended meaning that the list is made only during shopping.

× because it reminds me what I want to purchase.

✓ because it reminds me of what I want to purchase.

The verb 'remind' requires the preposition 'of' before the object to be grammatically correct in English.

× And also if I forgot something, I can open the list and I I'm sure about it like I have taken this, I have taken this, I haven't taken this.

✓ And also if I forget something, I can open the list and be sure about it, like I have taken this, I have taken this, I haven't taken this.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly and has redundant pronouns. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to maintain present tense consistency, and 'I I'm' is a repetition error.

× So it's very quite good for me to make a list when I shop.

✓ So it's quite good for me to make a list when I shop.

The adverbs 'very' and 'quite' should not be used together. Using 'quite' alone is sufficient and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I do make a list of my work as well because whenever I prepare for my studies, I make a list like I have done the listening and after that if something had missed by me then I can see the list and then read that one too.

✓ Yes, I do make a list of my work as well because whenever I prepare for my studies, I make a list like I have done the listening and after that if something has been missed by me then I can see the list and then read that one too.

The phrase 'had missed by me' is incorrect; the present perfect passive 'has been missed by me' is appropriate here to indicate an action that may have been missed recently.

× So it's important for me to make a list in your in my work also.

✓ So it's important for me to make a list in my work also.

The phrase 'in your in my work' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'in my work' to correctly indicate possession and context.

× I think, uh, most of the people don't like making lists because they think they are umm, uh, confident about uh, what they have learned or uh, uh, they know, like they will not forget anything when they go to purchase or if anyone, any, anything related to their work.

✓ I think most people don't like making lists because they feel confident about what they have learned or know, like they will not forget anything when they go shopping or with anything related to their work.

The sentence has redundant fillers and awkward phrasing. 'Most of the people' should be 'most people', and 'go to purchase' should be 'go shopping' for natural English usage.

× So I think they feel more confident and that's the reason they don't want.

✓ So I think they feel more confident and that's the reason they don't want to make lists.

The sentence is incomplete; 'they don't want' needs an object or complement to complete the meaning.

× Well, technology has transformed our lives in many ways.

✓ Well, technology has transformed our lives in many ways.

This sentence is correct and requires no change.

× And I would say if I write earlier, I wrote it on paper, but after after I purchased my new phone, I make a list on it that it will be easier for me to to see what whatever I want to purchase or.

✓ And I would say if I wrote earlier, I wrote it on paper, but after I purchased my new phone, I make a list on it so that it is easier for me to see whatever I want to purchase.

The phrase 'if I write earlier' should be 'if I wrote earlier' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'that it will be easier' is better expressed as 'so that it is easier' for clarity and correctness.