List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use the correct vocabulary and avoid repetition. For example, use 'list' instead of 'lease'. Also, structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, and use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy. Without a list, I might purchase unnecessary items or forget essentials. Therefore, making a list ensures I shop efficiently and avoid waste.

Sugestão: Focus on clear sentence structure and grammar. Avoid filler words like 'you know' and ensure your sentences are complete. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: I usually don't make lists for work because I don't have a regular job. However, recently I wrote down tasks in my notebook, and it was very helpful. From now on, I plan to make lists to stay organised.

Sugestão: Avoid using filler words such as 'uh' and 'actually'. Provide more thoughtful and specific reasons, and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming, or they prefer to rely on their memory. Additionally, they might feel that lists restrict their flexibility.

Sugestão: Try to speak more clearly and avoid filler words. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain your preference logically and coherently.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because sometimes I accidentally delete notes on my phone. Writing on paper feels more reliable and helps me keep track of my tasks easily.

× Yeah, I definitely make a lease because without a lease you don't know what is, what have you got at home.

✓ Yeah, I definitely make a list because without a list you don't know what is, what you have got at home.

The word 'lease' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'list'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but it affects meaning. The phrase 'what have you got' should be 'what you have got' to maintain correct word order in a statement.

× And also I'm thinking without at least you will get the things you don't need.

✓ And also I'm thinking without it, at least you will get the things you don't need.

The sentence is missing the pronoun 'it' after 'without' to specify what is missing. The phrase 'without at least' is unclear; adding 'it' clarifies the meaning.

× And this is probably better to do like make a list and write what whatever you don't have at home to buy.

✓ And this is probably better to do, like make a list and write whatever you don't have at home to buy.

The phrase 'what whatever' is redundant; only 'whatever' is needed. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; adding a comma after 'do' improves clarity.

× You know, actually I never tried to make a list for my work because I don't really work and I just have several works to done.

✓ You know, actually I never tried to make a list for my work because I don't really work and I just have several tasks to do.

The word 'works' is incorrect in this context; 'tasks' or 'pieces of work' is more appropriate. Also, 'to done' is incorrect; it should be 'to do'.

× But last time I tried to I did I make a note on my notebook and it it is really helpful.

✓ But last time I tried, I did make a note in my notebook and it was really helpful.

The phrase 'I did I make' is incorrect; it should be 'I did make'. Also, 'on my notebook' should be 'in my notebook' because notes are made inside a notebook. The tense 'is' should be past tense 'was' to match 'last time'.

× You know, actually, I prefer to make a list in my on the paper.

✓ You know, actually, I prefer to make a list on paper.

The phrase 'in my on the paper' is incorrect and redundant. The correct preposition is 'on' for paper, and 'my' is unnecessary here.

× Uh, if I'm doing on the phone, uh, on my phone, it will like it will go on becau I don't know where it will gone,

✓ Uh, if I'm doing it on my phone, it will, like, it will go on because I don't know where it will go,

The phrase 'doing on the phone' is missing the object 'it'. The word 'becau' is a typo for 'because'. 'Where it will gone' is incorrect; it should be 'where it will go'.

× but I think, umm, sometimes, uh, I have to delete some things from my phone.

✓ but I think, umm, sometimes, uh, I have to delete some things from my phone.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.