Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Definitely, I make a list when I shop because it help me remember what things I need to buy. Without the list I will forgot it and buy something not important for me.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I usually make a list for my studies even I had a deadline or something I need to finish, I will write down it on the list and it can make me more focused and efficiency.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Maybe because they think it's boring and they want to take things happen spontaneously.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's always on me and I think it is convenient and easier to correct and add something in your on your list.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点,但语法错误较多,且句子结构较简单。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式,避免重复表达。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式,并增加连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need. Otherwise, I might forget important things and end up buying unnecessary products.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误,如时态和词形错误,且表达不够简洁。建议使用正确的时态和词汇,避免冗余,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list for my studies. When I have deadlines, I write tasks down, which helps me stay focused and work more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答较简短且语法不准确,表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的表达方式,增加细节说明原因,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it boring and prefer to handle things spontaneously, enjoying the freedom to decide as they go.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答表达了观点,但有语法错误和重复词汇。建议注意句子结构,避免重复,并使用更自然的表达方式。
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, making it convenient to add or correct items anytime.
× Definitely, I make a list when I shop because it help me remember what things I need to buy.
✓ Definitely, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what things I need to buy.
这里的主语是单数的it,谓语动词help需要加-s,表示第三人称单数形式。
× Without the list I will forgot it and buy something not important for me.
✓ Without the list I will forget it and buy something not important for me.
这里使用了将来时will,后面动词应该用原形forget,而不是过去式forgot。
× Yes, I usually make a list for my studies even I had a deadline or something I need to finish, I will write down it on the list and it can make me more focused and efficiency.
✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my studies. Even if I have a deadline or something I need to finish, I will write it down on the list and it can make me more focused and efficient.
1. 'Even I had'应为'Even if I have'表示条件;2. 'write down it'应为'write it down',代词位置错误;3. 'efficiency'是名词,需用形容词'efficient'修饰。
× Maybe because they think it's boring and they want to take things happen spontaneously.
✓ Maybe because they think it's boring and they want things to happen spontaneously.
动词短语'take things happen'不正确,应改为'things to happen',表示让事情自发发生。
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's always on me and I think it is convenient and easier to correct and add something in your on your list.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's always with me and I think it is convenient and easier to correct and add something on your list.
1. 'on me'应为'with me',表示随身携带;2. 'in your on your list'重复且介词错误,应为'on your list'。