List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but a bit wordy and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid vague phrases like "refer to the best" which can confuse the listener. Instead, focus on specific reasons why making a list helps you shop efficiently.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and avoid buying unnecessary items. For example, when I go to the grocery store, I check my list to ensure I only buy what I need, which saves me time and money.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. It is important to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific details. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear phrases. Try to explain your habits clearly and logically.

Exemplo: No, I usually don't make a list for my work because I prefer to keep everything in my mind. I find that I can manage my tasks effectively by prioritizing them throughout the day without writing them down.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but is somewhat repetitive and unclear at the end. Use linking words to connect your ideas and clarify your points. Also, avoid repeating the same idea in different words. Try to explain why some people rely on mental lists instead of written ones.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they have sharp minds and prefer to keep their tasks organized mentally. For instance, they plan their day in their head and feel confident managing their work without writing things down.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more concise and natural. Avoid awkward phrases like "because of the using of phone every day in my life". Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and explain your preference clearly.

Exemplo: To be honest, I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me. Also, using my phone is more convenient and faster than writing on paper, which I find time-consuming.

× I prefer to make a list because it becomes easy for me when I go outside in the malls or in the grocery stores so that I can just refer to the best and just buy things that I need and put them in my baskets.

✓ I prefer to make a list because it becomes easy for me when I go outside to the mall or to the grocery store so that I can just refer to the list and buy the things that I need and put them in my basket.

The phrase 'in the malls or in the grocery stores' is incorrect because it implies multiple malls and stores in a general context. Usually, when speaking about shopping, singular forms 'the mall' and 'the grocery store' are used to refer to the typical place one shops. Also, 'refer to the best' is unclear and likely a mistake; it should be 'refer to the list'. 'Baskets' should be singular 'basket' because the person likely uses one basket at a time.

× To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because every time I have my phone with myself and because of the using of phone every day in my life, I just forgot to write everything on paper and I just feel waste of time to write on paper.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have my phone with me and because I use my phone every day, I just forget to write everything on paper and I feel it is a waste of time to write on paper.

The phrase 'have my phone with myself' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'me' in this context, so it should be 'with me'. 'Because of the using of phone' is awkward and ungrammatical; it should be 'because I use my phone'. 'I just forgot' should be present tense 'I just forget' to match the habitual action. 'I just feel waste of time' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel it is a waste of time' to be grammatically correct.