List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but some sentences are slightly awkward and redundant. Try to use more natural phrasing and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time and avoid buying things impulsively. For example, by sticking to my list, I can focus on what I really need and make my shopping more efficient.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work, no matter how busy I am. By prioritizing tasks, I can finish my work before the deadline and avoid feeling overwhelmed.

Sugestão: There are some mistakes in word choice and sentence structure. Be careful with spelling and grammar, and try to express your ideas more clearly. Use linking words to contrast ideas effectively.

Exemplo: I believe some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to make spontaneous decisions. However, I prefer making lists because they help me manage my time better and stay organized.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid vague statements and explain your reasons clearly with linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and always with me. For instance, I can easily add or remove items using the notes app, which makes organizing my tasks much simpler.

× This way I don't have to deal with impulsive decision to buy anything that I don't need.

✓ This way I don't have to deal with impulsive decisions to buy anything that I don't need.

The noun 'decision' should be plural 'decisions' because it refers to multiple instances of impulsive buying, not just one.

× which helped me to complete my task before the deadline without any workload.

✓ which helps me to complete my tasks before the deadline without any workload.

The sentence is about a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate instead of past tense 'helped'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple tasks.

× I think some people don't like making less because they think it's restrictive and they might like taking spontaneous decision.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they think it's restrictive and they might like taking spontaneous decisions.

The word 'less' is incorrect; it should be 'lists' (plural) to match the context. Also, 'decision' should be plural 'decisions' because spontaneous decisions are usually multiple.

× But I prefer to make least it helps to manage time and it is convenient as well.

✓ But I prefer to make lists; it helps to manage time and it is convenient as well.

The word 'least' is incorrect; it should be 'lists' (plural). Also, a semicolon is added to separate two independent clauses for clarity.

× It manage all the tax and we can make a list in our note app without any problem.

✓ It manages all the tasks and we can make a list in our note app without any problem.

The verb 'manage' should be 'manages' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'tax' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'tasks'. This corrects both subject-verb agreement and word choice.