Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes I do. Before I go to market, I definitely make a list. By this way I won't forget anything I want to buy and avoid buying everything necessary.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yeah, for sure. Before I go to sleep, I must make a list to make sure I won't forget anything I should learn. For example, when I prepare for my schedule, I must make a list. Yeah.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
To be honestly, To Do List is a challenging thing for somebody because you you must double check to make sure you won't forget anything important. So for me it's a crazy thing.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Honestly, I definitely would prefer to write a list on paper because I really like contact with the paper. It make me feel so. Impression.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但有语法错误和表达不够自然。例如,“By this way”应改为“By doing this”,且“avoid buying everything necessary”表达不清晰。建议多练习地道表达,注意句子结构和词汇搭配。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the market. By doing this, I can remember everything I need to buy and avoid purchasing unnecessary items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中有重复和不连贯的问题,如“Yeah, for sure”和“Yeah”重复使用,且表达不够清晰。建议回答时避免重复,使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list before going to bed to ensure I don't forget anything I need to study. For instance, I prepare a schedule to organize my tasks effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和重复,如“To be honestly”和“you you”,表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的表达,并避免重复。
Exemplo: To be honest, some people find making to-do lists challenging because they have to double-check to avoid forgetting important tasks. Personally, I find it a bit stressful.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多,如“It make me feel so. Impression.”表达不完整且不自然。建议练习完整句子表达感受,并注意主谓一致。
Exemplo: Honestly, I prefer writing my lists on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of the paper. It makes the task feel more personal and memorable.
× Before I go to market, I definitely make a list.
✓ Before I go to the market, I definitely make a list.
在英语中,表示去某个具体的市场时,通常需要加定冠词“the”,所以应说“go to the market”。
× By this way I won't forget anything I want to buy and avoid buying everything necessary.
✓ In this way, I won't forget anything I want to buy and avoid buying anything unnecessary.
“By this way”应改为“In this way”,且“avoid buying everything necessary”表达不准确,应为“avoid buying anything unnecessary”,以表达避免买不必要的东西。
× Before I go to sleep, I must make a list to make sure I won't forget anything I should learn.
✓ Before I go to sleep, I must make a list to make sure I don't forget anything I should learn.
“won't forget”在这里时态不太合适,使用一般现在时“don't forget”更符合习惯表达。
× To be honestly, To Do List is a challenging thing for somebody because you you must double check to make sure you won't forget anything important.
✓ To be honest, a To-Do List is a challenging thing for some people because you must double check to make sure you won't forget anything important.
“To be honestly”应为“To be honest”,且“somebody”改为“some people”更自然;重复的“you you”应去掉一个。
× Honestly, I definitely would prefer to write a list on paper because I really like contact with the paper.
✓ Honestly, I definitely would prefer to write a list on paper because I really like contact with paper.
“contact with the paper”中的“the”不必要,通常表达喜欢与纸接触时不加定冠词。
× It make me feel so. Impression.
✓ It makes me feel so impressed.
原句结构不完整且动词形式错误,应使用第三人称单数“makes”,并用形容词“impressed”表达感受。